Gift of Fate Chapter 12 (13/?)

[luminare91]

Summary: Oliver has been missing for two years, ever since his boat went down in a sudden storm. Chloe is still grieving for him. What will it take for her to move on and live her life again? What happened to Oliver? Will he ever come back? And who's behind the mysterious disappearances in Star City?

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Comments

[jessicaj703]

Loved it! I definitely think the AN at the beginning helped. :) Great job incorporating the continuity suggestions - I really think it reads a lot more fluidly. Love the banter between Chloe and Ollie when they're introducing themselves to GL. Nice work! Can't wait to see what happens next. :)

[luminare91]

The banter was a ton of fun to write. Thanks for all the help!

[liselle2010]

I love that Green Lantern is there, that is just so much fun. But that ending with Chlollie...wowo!

[luminare91]

I actually have a reason for bringing him, which will become clear in later chapters. But he is fun to write, though I will admit that I don't know much about him beyond what I've found on Wikipedia and in other fics.

Thanks for the review!!

[chlollielover]

Finally! They're together!!!!
Is Oliver going to know who Green Lantern is? I want so badly to see that scene! *.*

Oliver has sexy time planned for Chloe, I bet!

Awww, this was amazing *.*

[luminare91]

yes! they're finally together. You have no idea how many times I've tried to write that scene and then threw it out because it didn't fit there. So I was ridiculously happy that I finally got to write it.

Oliver will definitely find out who GL is, just not quite yet. I'm looking forward to writing that scene.

Thanks for the review!!

[serafina19]

*chuckle* Timing is one of my huge weaknesses (*cough* why do you *cough* think I decided to put dates on CG *cough*), so no sweat.

There's nothing like a couple near-death experiences to bring people together, is there? It makes sense though and I liked how it was handled.

Curious to see Green Lantern's involvement here, but all in all, great chapter.

[luminare91]

LMAO. I know!!! I'm constantly going back and forth to figure out how much time's passed and I'm always forgetting that people aren't in my head and they need to know how much time's passed.

Near death experiences are vital to a good love story. I'm glad you liked how I did that. I just had to find a way to work in Chloe's power.

Green Lantern does have a role in this fic. He's not just there for no reason. I promise!

Thanks for the review!!

[amazing_07]

so good!! I am so happy that they are back together!!!

[luminare91]

Thank you! I'm glad they're back together too!