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luminare91

Gift of Fate Chapter 9 (10/?)

Apr 29, 2011 11:54

Summary: Oliver has been missing for two years, ever since his boat went down in a sudden storm. Chloe is still grieving for him. What will it take for her to move on and live her life again? What happened to Oliver? Will he ever come back? And who's behind the mysterious disappearances in Star City?

Rating: PG-13 ( Read more... )

verse: fate, fandom: smallville, mutlichapter, fanfic: gift of fate, pairing: chlollie

Comments 13

iluvwinchester April 29 2011, 17:16:56 UTC

YAYYY!!! You updated. I actually started jumping up and down when i saw the update. I loved it. And the sexually tension b/w oliver and chloe..HOTT!
Cant wait for chapter 10 =D

P.S sorry for not commenting before.

luminare91 May 4 2011, 13:23:20 UTC

Well thanks for commenting now, lol.

Just please tell me you weren't in a public place when you were jumping up and down because I would not want to be the cause of your embarrassment, :D

Glad you're enjoying this!

modscho April 29 2011, 18:33:22 UTC

Oh I loved Ollie's first steps into being the GA and saving his city ... he did pretty well if I might say so :)

Now there's time for some Chloe/Ollie moments, because we all know that friendship thingy can't go on forever! Right?

luminare91 May 4 2011, 13:25:11 UTC

No their friendship thingy can't go on forever, but it will go on for a few more chapters. Something big happens in the next one, which should be up in a few days. The next few chapters are intense, but it's worth it. Or it will be once I finish writing them.

jessicaj703 April 29 2011, 19:04:53 UTC

Again, a great chapter. I'm happy I could help you out and I like the changes you made to the last taser arrow and the discussion at the end. :) Can't wait to see where it goes from here!

luminare91 May 4 2011, 13:26:20 UTC

You were definitely a big help. I tend to forget that people can't see what's going on in my head so certain stuff makes perfect sense to me because that's how I pictured it, but it doesn't make sense to anyone else.

Seriously, thanks so much for the help.

saurina April 29 2011, 19:25:08 UTC

The green arrow in active duty was awesome, and you had me on the edge of my seat when he fought against the last couple of muggers. Also the sexual tension between Chloe and Oliver is hot, but dang they need to talk to each other in stead of assuming the other one isn't ready, crazy kids *shakes fist*

Can't wait to see what the big surprise is come next chapter, pleeease don't keep us all waiting to long..:))

luminare91 May 4 2011, 13:29:19 UTC

The Green Arrow action was really fun to write, as was all the sexual tension. I'm really loving messing with them like that. Oliver really feels like he has to prove himself because in his mind it's his fault any of it started. If he hadn't been all insecure about Jimmy, Chloe wouldn't have been as inclined to be insecure about Tess. So he feels that he has to show her that he's past all that, and he's not doing a very good job.

The next chapter took a little longer than I expected. I ended up reworking the last half. The delay wasn't intended to be this long. Hopefully I'll have it up by friday at the latest.

liselle2010 April 29 2011, 20:40:36 UTC

great chapter. I so love this fic. I get all giddy wheen I see you have posted. Okay...what is the big surprise???? I don't do well with waiting....

luminare91 May 4 2011, 13:30:45 UTC

Awww...thank you. It's awesome to hear that people get excited when I post.

But I feel bad. The next chapter wasn't supposed to take this long. Sorry about that. Between school and deciding that I needed to rewrite half of it, it's taking much longer than I expected. I fully intended to have it up by Monday. But it should be posted by the end of the week at the latest. Scouts honor. :P