Invisible Fireworks (Part One of ?)

May 26, 2011 22:38

Invisible Fireworks

Summary: Slightly A/U from season four. Lexie and Mark become friends early on during her intern year.
Rated: M

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pairing: mark/lexie, story: fireworks

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lizzy29 May 27 2011, 08:28:54 UTC

Wow loved it. New ML fic yay. He was so sweet to her I really wish they got together in S4

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lumifan99 May 27 2011, 19:38:02 UTC
Thank you so much for reading. I am so happy you liked the fist part. More to come soon.

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lexiesloan May 27 2011, 10:59:25 UTC
But when he looked at her, she looked so sad and lonely. She looked the way he constantly felt.

This line, right here, is how I always write Mark and Lexie and it's why I fell in love with them in the first place. Before they had each other, they really didn't have anyone. GREAT JOB, Kim! I can't wait to read more! Already, they're wonderful together :)

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lumifan99 May 27 2011, 19:41:03 UTC
I feel like Mark and Lexie were both such outcasts and so lonely when they first started at SGH. I always thought that was something they would bond over.

Thanks for reading Katie. :)

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lewie45 May 27 2011, 17:45:21 UTC
This is great. I loved how they connected right from their first meeting in the bar. I love how he doesn't see her as an idiot intern but for someone who is feeling lonely. I always hated Meredith and her friends reaction to Lexie.

Look forward to reading the next installment.

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lumifan99 May 27 2011, 19:44:38 UTC
Thanks for reading! The moment he saw her at the he saw a little of himself inside her, he knows the same loneliness.

Meredith was pretty terrible towards Lexie when she first arrived at SGH. And in this story their relationship will develop as well.

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lewie45 May 28 2011, 00:04:37 UTC
I hate how Meredith treats Lexie at first, it's not her fault that Ellis cheats on Thatcher, that Ellis takes Meredith away from Thatcher, that there was no contact...my guess is Thatcher wasn't allowed contact with Meredith. It's not Lexie's fault that Meredith had a crap childhood, and that Lexie had the fairytale one...we assume. Heck, Thatcher could have been a crap dad to Lexie and Molly and the only good was Susan.

Just because Meredith is pissed at her parents mistakes she shouldn't take it out on Lexie, the girl who had no say in her parents and being her half sister and in many ways in having to move back to Seattle and do her residency there instead of in Boston where she'd planned.

I like that their relationship is better, and for Meredith she is trying it's just not enough for Lexie. Lexie is a bit of a tenderheart and needs more than Meredith can give. Not that I'm dissing Meredith, it's just how she was raised, and a part of her personality because of it.

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lussy83 May 27 2011, 20:28:44 UTC
Hi, wow! I loved it. I loved how Mark and Lexie bonded about their difficult times at SG. I never appreciated how Meredith and her friends treated Lexie when she arrived in Seattle.

The last sentence was really heartbreaking.

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lumifan99 May 28 2011, 00:39:24 UTC
Thank you so much for reading. :) Don't worry Thatcher won't be the only person in Lexie's life for long.

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