A Marriage Inconvenienced (ch.6)

Jul 04, 2009 16:19

Sakura stared at the map that Norio had unfurled and desperately hope that she looked interested.  Honestly when she had asked what had happened to part of the caravan, she hadn’t expected a two-hour lecture on the history, uses, and politics of the silk trade.  A few of the wagons had branched off deeper into Rock Country.  Among the travelers was ( Read more... )

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hungrytiger11 July 5 2009, 21:01:32 UTC
This is a very different Kakashi and Sakura than one often sees in stories. Kakashi, especially is very calculating. Yet, to me, your versions of them ring incredibly true. The questions of whether this nobleman can understand and truly value Sakura as herself is also interesting.

But what really sets this apart is the LOL-tastic lines littered about. My personal favorite was
“Your other choice is the Pit of Death.”

Its like Cake or Death- well, then, I'll take cake!

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lulu_42 July 5 2009, 22:07:05 UTC
Well, we're out of cake! :D

I imagine that Kakashi is calculating, but most people don't focus on that because of the Sharingan. So I'm trying to make his battles a little different.
Thank you for reading. :)

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nekokatsu July 6 2009, 14:43:20 UTC
I am SO thrilled to see an update- and a double chapter, no less! *happy dance*

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