A Marriage Inconvenienced (prologue)

[lulu_42]

Title: A Marriage Inconvenienced
Rating: T for innuendo
Summary:  The math was simple: Him plus Her equaled genius.  Pity he forgot to tell her.

Comments

[idle_ramblingsx]

Wow, I like it so far, but I have to ask: Where is Naruto?

The Kakashi became Hokage just kinda rubs the wrong way, especially since Naruto was completely no show.

And this might be a spoiler, but right now, Kakashi is dead in the manga. He was killed by Pein. So sad, right? Dunno if that'll affect your fic.

I wish I could beta for you, but I'm completely mauled by my own fics. Sorry.

[lulu_42]

Naruto is around, I didn't place him in it yet, he's doing something important. (he should show up in chapter two)

I heard about Kakashi, so I wanted to start posting while denial (including my own) is still strong. I won't believe it until there is something definitive.

[darkxkunoichi]

i'm keeping hope alive for Kakashi too! i will need some definite proof that he's gone. the opening page to the current chapter is odd too since it says that Jiraiya was murdered but Kakashi was stolen; i'm not too sure how to interpret that. haha.

i love the prologue very much. it's definitely something i haven't seen before.

i'll be your last resort beta if you seriously can't find anyone better. it's not that i don't want to; i am familiar with Naruto and grammar is my friend, but i don't have any experience with beta-ing, so it would be better if you found someone [i would suggest at least 2, just to make sure you get well rounded POV and such] with more experience, so you can get the full benefits of having a beta.

happy writing!

[icarust]

Check out my fics at ff.net (IcarusT). Let me know if you would like me to beta. This story sounds interesting :)

[lulu_42]

Yay! Thank you for your offer!

I'm nearly done with my first proper chapter, so you can tell me how you want me to send it to you. :)

[naureen_rally]

Be strong Kakashi and fight for Sakura. After all you are a genius.

@ lulu-42: the faith in kakashi is still strong. We'll read ur story most especially if kakashi is dead in the manga. I loved the line where all you wrote was "Then Sakura opened the ground with her fist." It was like that's all he needed.

[lulu_42]

Hee! That's one of my favorite lines. It should be a little different from some stories because Kakashi is chasing her for marriage even though he's not in love with her.

I'm starting to get a feel for the characters so it should be fun to write.

[cptnsuz]

Ooo, interesting premise. I'll definitely try and follow this to see how you develop the story.