Prosaic

[lulledbyscreams]

[Title] Prosaic
[Pairing] Broken Kyumin
[Genre] Angst
[Rating] PG-13
[Summary] All Sungmin wants is the light back in his life.
[Warning] Some violence, implied self-harm/self-mutilation, with a bit of character death on the side, and topped off with a little crazy Sungmin. Also this was written while I was feeling fairly unstable so yeah, there’s that

Comments

[xsilentserenity]

omg why are you depressed /spot.

[lulledbyscreams]

I'm just so tired seri. I'm so very tired and nothing is helping.

[yuue04]

OMG IT'S BROKEN PAIRING
OMG BOTH I AND SERI STARTED OUR COMMENTS WITH OMG *OTL SO RANDOM*

[lulledbyscreams]

The first time I write kyumin in forever and it's this. /sigh

[yuue04]

EVERYTHING SOUNDS SO REAL AND IT STRUCK ME
WHAT HAPPENED UNNIE??? WHAT'S BEEN STRESSING YOU??? I HOPE YOU'RE DOING OKAY...DON'T KEEP EVERYTHING TO YOURSELF OKAY?
OMG THE FIC JUST LEFT ME LITERALLY SPEECHLESS, EVERY WORDS FELL JUST IN THE RIGHT PLACE, HOW CAN SOMEONE BE SO GOOD *CRIES*
WHY ARE YOU HURTING YOURSELF...IF WON'T SOLVE ANYTHING MING AH...I ALWAYS FEEL SAD WHENEVER PEOPLE ARE LOOKING FOR SOLUTION BY HURTING THEMSELVES
THERE ARE PEOPLE WHO LOVE AND CARE FOR YOU MING ME KYU CAME BACK FOR YOU RIGHT???
I WE LOVE YOU UNNIE, SO IF YOU FEEL TIRED LEAN ON US OKAY???
*HUGS TIGHTLY* <333333333333333333

[lulledbyscreams]

oh annie, i'm sorry. i didn't mean to worry you. don't worry, i'll be okay!
and i love you too bb! thank you for looking after me >.<
<3333
/hugs you back

[monkjaeh]

I'm speechless .. i really am , this fic is clear yet not clear , lol idk what i'm saying but i'm kinda confused ..
but as always , like usual ... u AMAZE me !! oh seriously u amaze me , ur choice of words and vocab , the way the story goes and the way u connect it .. the description and details about everything , how the characters feel , ..etc .. oh ur amazing xD i have nothing more to say .. ur simply very very talented :))

this fic is really sad .. what makes me worried , r u okay tummie ? n ur status is depressed too :( whatever happened unnie , cheer up ok .. n when ur depressed the best thing to do is talk to someone , a best friend or something :) fighting babe ~
N!CE Fic tummie , love it :D ur amazing as ever ;) keep it up ^^ love you <3 xoxoxoxo

[lulledbyscreams]

you always leave me such sweet comments. thank you so much bb! you really made my day ^^
and i have been feeling kinda down lately, but don't worry. i'm sure i'll be okay. thanks for your advice and concern though, it really means a lot to me!
love you too hannie!!!
<33333

[rei_ming]

.....SOBS
beautifully written angst
/sits in a bubble of despair bec i cant write angst

[lulledbyscreams]

haha, thanks, but don't fret. my angst is not nearly as good as i wished it was, but it's still better than it used to be. you can do it too.
thanks for reading and commenting ^^

[eunhaekyuminftw]

OHMYGODDDDDDDDD U MENTION ME !!!! GAHHHH AND GUESS WHAT I FCUKIN DIDNT REALIZE BECAUSE I LOST THE CONNECTION :///// DAYUM FRUSTRATINGGG . ok goes read now . sorry fo not replying sooner >< I'm a bad chingu rite ? :/

[eunhaekyuminftw]

I'm reading this on like 3 in the morning because at this time only I can get better connection -____- so pardon me if I'm saying nonsense but awwww dear what a depressing fic this is . it kinda light up a bit but then it goes downhill again . BUT HEYYYYY u know what u always have the best ending . just somehow u can pull it off . SO CONGRATS :D A REALLY NICE FIC INDEED *I'm still honored act how my name could be mentioned by u . gahhhh MY LIFE IS COMPLETE <333333

[lulledbyscreams]

lol, you're silly naj! it'a all because of you that i had the confidence to post this, so thank you! c: and no, of course you're not a bad chingu!
and thanks for your feedback bb! i really appreciate it! and i'm really glad you liked it! thanks again!
<33333

[eunhaekyuminftw]

awww . seee u love to make me felt soooo overwhelmed all over . u're welcome dear :) <33333