Watch Over Me- 11/?
[Title] Watch Over Me
[Pairing] Haehyuk
[Genre] Romance/Fluff/Family AU/Drama (for this chapter)
[Rating] PG
[Summary] Coming to the rescue of Donghae, whose brother died in a car accident with his wife, Hyukjae suddenly finds himself as the nanny of 6 year Kyuhyun and 4 year old Jino.
[Warning] Older Donghae (25) and younger Hyukjae (21), and a ( Read more... )
[Pairing] Haehyuk
[Genre] Romance/Fluff/Family AU/Drama (for this chapter)
[Rating] PG
[Summary] Coming to the rescue of Donghae, whose brother died in a car accident with his wife, Hyukjae suddenly finds himself as the nanny of 6 year Kyuhyun and 4 year old Jino.
[Warning] Older Donghae (25) and younger Hyukjae (21), and a ( Read more... )
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omfggggg! it was all like... ANGSTY! and then... donghae understood and then he hugged hyuk and then they were still having fun but it was sooooo sad and he was crying and i was just like fml and then HE KISSED HIM. alksdjl;fjasl;dfjk;skjf;lksjdfljk
and then he cried himself to sleep. you cry-baby hyuk. >.>
otl. no ninja-ing from me! >.< school just started up today! what if it hadn't!??! what if i was still on break? I WOULDA GOTTEN YOUU BY SURPRISEEE!! :D
omfg i love this chapter! they're bonding so much and i love it! <33
but i dun want hyuk to leaveeeee! noooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! noooooooooooo! nooooooooo! i dun wanna see kyu and jino's reactions in the next chapter or whenever.
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and i think this is the most serious donghae has ever been in this series! it may happen like 2 more times. TOPS.
and call it selfish, but i needed hae to kiss hyuk, so yeah, i just threw that in there.
and lol @ hyuk being a cry baby!
but he is ._.
and i don't even care
haha, well if your breaks are anything like mine, you would've still been alseep!
and i'm glad you liked it! i was so worried about it drifting from its usual fluffy content, and almost deleted the whole thin on multiple occasions OTL
and i know, but hyuk has to leave!
"think of the children!"
i really don't want to write their reaction either. god, what did i get myself into?? >_<
and hae's right. family is important.
/nods sagely
omg, your broken heart, i sees it and i'm sorry :c
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i've missed you ;~:
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BUT WAIT UNTIL I FINISH BANGING MY HEAD =.=" I HAVE NO IDEA WHY I'D BECOME MORE AND MORE DISORIENTED LATELY *SIGH* I THINK I COULD HAVE SET THE RECORD FOR ALWAYS MISTAKING FICS *GOD, I'VE BEEN DOING IT FOR....I LOST MY COUNTS ALREADY* I SAW YOUR THE RULED BY BLOOD POST FIRST BUT I CLICKED THE LINK TO THIS THINKING IT WAS THE SAME THING AND WHEN I READ THE FIRST LINE I WAS LIKE, WHAT DID I MISSED???SINCE WHEN HYUK KNOWS HAE???AND I FOUND MYSELF UTTERLY STUPID FOR MISTAKING THINGS AGAIN *CONTINUES BANGING HEAD* ENOUGH FOR NONSENSICAL STUFF I BROUGHT UP
AND I STARTED FLIPPING MY STUFFED TOYS *EVEN BITING THEM* WHEN I READ THIS --> Anyone who can’t see how amazing and wonderful you are just doesn’t know you well enough <-- IT MAY HAVE BEEN A NORMAL PHRASE FOR ANYONE ELSE BUT I ALWAYS USE THAT SOLELY TO DESCRIBE SUJU MEMBERS LOL *SHED HAPPY TEARS ( ... )
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lol, you can't bang your head! that might make it worse!
omg biting them?? i don't know if that is a good thing or not XD
and i'm glad you like it! it was my favorite sentence out of the last few chapters i've written! and it totally describes suju perfectly!
and yeah, hyuk's dad, and all the other parents that think like this, need a good punch to the head :/
lol, i'll be sure to include lots more skinship for you annie ^^ esp since hae's starting to- wait, i can't give anything away yet! >.<
and well, let''s just say i won't have fun writing jino and kyu's reactions ^^; but it is necessary for some things to happen, so i have to do it :c
YAY!! my glomping!! :DD
/opens arms wide
i feel all special now!!! :33
<3333333333333
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I STILL HAVE MISTAKES IN MY COMMENT
ACTUALLY WHEN I SAW THE TITLE RULED BY BLOOD, I WAS THINKING MARKING OF A BEAST IN MY HEAD
BECAUSE CLEARLY HAE DID MEET HYUK IN RULED BY BLOOD *DIES*
AWWWWW WHHHHHHHHHHY *WHINES* WHY MUST YOU STOP WHEN YOU'RE CLEARLY GIVE ME SUCH A HINT!!!
BUT I DON'T WANNA SPOIL THE FUN TOOOO KEKEKE
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<333
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Gosh~ Donghae is so sweet to Hyuk....but i can't believe Hyuk is leaving them. what will the kids think??? oh i hope Hae chases after him or something!!
Hyuk wants to see his sis? well i hope it goes well...
on to find out right now >< i'm sorry i've missed all these updates!!
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well, i know i'm not looking forward t writing their reactions >_< i think i'm gonna find a way to cheat
and, lol, i totally responded to your comments in the wrong order, omg OTL
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There was so much angst in this and was it your goal to get everyone who read this emotional? I was ready to start crying when Hyuk was telling Donghae about his past. It also doesn't help that Time Machine was playing at that time.. But that little kiss made everything better. XD
But Hyuk has to move out and I really don't want him to listen to Wook.
Can't wait for the next chapter! ~off to go read your other updated fic~
Random but: Sherlock is flawless and I'm so excited for that MV to come out. :D
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and i love time machine. it is such a beautiful song, and fany is so flawless in the mv!
and i tried to end the chapter on a slightly lighter note, so hopefully the little kiss makes things a little better ^^;
and he doesn't want to listen to wook either, and i don't really want to make him listen to him, but it seems i just can't leave some drama out of the story orz
but thanks for reading! and i'll see you over there then!
SM needs to give me a mv NOW. and it may be a little unhealthy how much i love 'the reason'. but i regret nothing.
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Time Machine is flawless as well, they were all perfect, and The Reason from SHINee is my favorite song off of that album.
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lmbo, wook should just focus on keeping yesung from destroying their house a second time :p
i loved pretty much every song from their japanese album. it has to be my favorite by them. and i have not stopped playing the reason since i got the album. but then again it doesn't surprise me. shinee always has perfectly crafted albums.
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I really like the fic and how Donghae reacts to all of Hyuk's movements. But I get this random feeling that Dnghae will somehow get Hyuk to move back in when he finds out and that he'll have to start again with a mad Kyuhyun since Hyuk just left without telling them. I don't know whether or not to be mad at Ryeowook for insisting he move back in 'cause I get the feeling it's not just because he's looking out for Hyuk and the kids. I hope everything goes well with his sister :)
Update again soon!!!!
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YES I AM. BUT I'M NOT REALLY SUPPOSED TO TELL YOU THAT.
i'm glad you like it!! but i'm afraid i can't reveal much yet! but you'll find out the kid's (donghae included) reactions in the next chapter ^^
and i'll try! :3
thanks for reading and commenting ^^
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^ my imagination is to wild....so update before I think up other random stuff :) please~
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let your imagination run wild! :DD
i'd love to hear the random stuff you come up with! it makes me want to make the most unsuspected thins happen ^^
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