Fic: V is for... (part one) (BSG)

[lullabymoon]

Title: V is for... (part one)
Author: Lullabymoon
Characters/Pairing: Laura Roslin/Bill Adama, Doc Cottle, Kara Thrace
Rating: T
Spoilers: 'Crossroads Pt1'
Word Count: 3120
A/N: Written for the 

Comments

[lullabymoon]

Yup, he can be an incredible idiot sometimes.

[miri_d]

Oh, man, I hope the second part ends on a better note! This is a great story, I really laughed when I realized just what "V" was for. And then Cottle meddling and everything was great. I was laughing right up til the end, which obviously turned depressing. Roslin and Adama were pretty spot-on, too. I'm not sure, though, why Adama is so angry at Roslin about it? Wouldn't he instead be angry at Cottle for manipulating him, and just be embarrassed to have walked in on Roslin? Or is he angry because he wanted it to be him and not a "massager" XD? Good luck on part 2! :D

[lullabymoon]

I'm glad you enjoyed it and found it funny.

I'm of the opinion (well I should be, it's my story) that Bill is angry at Laura because she wasn't confiding in him (he was already hurt by this) and going to Cottle for help as well as being angry at himself for pushing her away to a 'massager'. He then just seemed to shut down and not let her explain like he has done before ie when he found out about Hera. I did have a few lines with his thought processes which explained his anger in an earlier draft but it wasn't flowing right. It is explained properly in part two though. Hope that makes things clearer.

Thanks for your comment. :)

[miri_d]

Okay, things make more sense now :P. Thanks for explaining!

And you're welcome XD.

[jo_siris]

Ok I want to hug you and airlock you at the same time!!!

I love this. Bill needs such a smack round the head and I adore cottle so so much. That gets you the hug

LEAVING IT THERE. (yes i know part two is coming...) Thats just evil!

[lullabymoon]

Please don't airlock me! LOL. Yes I know it was evil but I just couldn't help myself.

I'm glad you liked Cottle as I was a bit wary of writing him. Bill does need a smack on the head. You never know what'll happen next. :)

I'm so happy you loved it.

[jo_siris]

Yeah I bet you cracked yourself up leaving it there. :P

No hon, you got Cottle Perfectly. I lmao at him.

Now, wheres pt 2?

Dammit why do I not have a cottle icon?

[lullabymoon]

Thats a relief. Thanks.

I was origninally going to post the whole thing in one go but I realised I'd be more motivated to finish it if I posted it in parts. So I didn't originally plan on being evil. LOL.

Part 2 is in progress but uni is being evil right now so I have no idea when it'll be up. :(

Please don't gove me photoshopping ideas, thats the last thing I need now (that and I'm not very good at photoshop yet).

[stiletto_freek]

Don't go! My massager is broken. can you fix it for me?

Hey. You don't need a massager! I am just right here!

Please tell me that he will come back!Please I need to know that he will be back! That was SO evil from you, that I can't even say how much I want to airlock you!

Great! I was giggling like mad about that massager! Please part 2!!!! Pretty please+batteries+cigarettes for Cottle= next chapter!

Thank you for sharing! :))

[lullabymoon]

LOL.

I'm glad you enjoyed it and don't worry, Bill will be back (as soon as it's written I promise!)

I'll repeat my plea: please don't airlock me! :)

[stiletto_freek]

Ok.Ok.Ok. *takes several deep breaths*

That is good to know you know? *rolls eyes* BUT..I won't airlock you as long as you promise to bring Bill back and you know...makeouwithLaura..*caugh* But I am keeping an eye on the Airlock button..so you know not to mess with people..*g*

Did I say tht I like this story? Don't remember because of threatening to airlock people! :))

[lullabymoon]

But that would give the story away! Bill does come back but I refuse to say any more than that. You'll just have to wait and see. (soemtimes being evil is fun!) :D

Well you said it was great *blushes* (thanks btw) so I assumed you liked it.

[larsfarm77]

I love your idea ... it's fun to read Cottle setting everything up. But Bill ... dude ... he can't be this dense right ;) ?? Can't wait for more ...

[lullabymoon]

I agree, Cottle = Hilarious.

As for Bill, he's managed to not take her hints for at least a season so anything is possible. LOL.