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takhallus in lukexsylar

Transgress

Mar 23, 2009 21:30

Title : Transgress
Word count : 1155
Rating : NC17
Notes : For the lukexsylar community challenge

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fic challenge: 1. transgress, author: takhallus, rating: nc-17

Comments 33

pupnamedpeter March 23 2009, 22:03:47 UTC

Okay, that last line made me tear up. This is just awesome :)

takhallus March 23 2009, 23:28:56 UTC

Thanks! I thought the last line might be a bit schmoopy but then again I like schmoop XD

buni_in_the_sky March 23 2009, 22:04:26 UTC

omg omg, this is soo sweet. T_T I love this, great fic! <3 <3 I love how Sylar was so sweet the second time and when he came back.

takhallus March 23 2009, 23:29:57 UTC

Yeah he learns you get more flies with honey than with vinegar or whatever that stupid saying is LOL

Thanks for reading xx

bloody_beary March 23 2009, 22:28:58 UTC

I love how Sylar can't admit that he's in a relationship with Luke, and yet he's so sweet and gentle eventually. Love it!

takhallus March 23 2009, 23:30:54 UTC

Yeah, that boy can't commit for all bloody hell! Daft old Sylar ;-)

Glad you liked x

flwrpwr_vampyre March 23 2009, 22:29:52 UTC

Wow, I completely love this. Sylar's first punishment is creative and god, Luke's reaction to basically being raped the first time they have sex. *is speechless* Absolutely fantastic.

takhallus March 23 2009, 23:31:52 UTC

Thanks, I figured his first time with Sylar wouldn't be all wine and roses

Thanks for reading xx

elle_rahen March 23 2009, 22:29:55 UTC

This was perfect! "You made a rule." That line clinched it for me. From seemingly harsh to just the right amount of sweetness. *contented sigh* Off to read again.

takhallus March 23 2009, 23:32:24 UTC

Cheers! Glad you liked it x