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BLEACH: Grimmjow/Ulquiorra Fanfic - "Turning Left"

Jan 30, 2011 13:25

Title: Turning Left
Pairing: Grimmjow/Ulquiorra
Genre: Humour/angst
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Bleach belongs to Kubo Tite, and I make no profit from this fanwork. The only thing I gain is the pleasure of playing with writing two of my favourite characters in my words/situations. (Just because you borrow a toy, that doesn't make it yours)
Summary: Grimmjow ( Read more... )

bl, shounen-ai, ulquiorra, bleach, grimmjow, fanfiction, grimmjow/ulquiorra

Comments 10

sweetiedogood January 30 2011, 04:27:35 UTC

That was cute, really.

Grimmjow's "it should be cuz I'd win" was terribly IC/endearing. I could definitely imagine the sexta espada saying that. lol.

luka_valentine January 30 2011, 12:23:16 UTC

Reall? I'm so glad - Grimmjow is fun to write! Thanks for reading and commenting XD

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luka_valentine January 30 2011, 12:26:40 UTC

I want to cuddle him too! But because I can't, I'll just get Ulqui to do it instead ;)...

I'm glad you liked it! I wanted it to be lighthearted/funny, but a friend who doesn't have LJ read it and told me it was just depressing... I think I need to work on writing humour!

Thanks for reading and commenting :)

cole231 January 30 2011, 16:40:26 UTC

There is so many fun parts to this story! I absolutely love it. The ending was so cute XD and Grimmjow? You wrote him brilliantly..really loved it..
-cole-

luka_valentine January 31 2011, 12:09:17 UTC

Thank you! I was worried that they were both a little OOC, but I'm glad Grimmjow came across well - he's fun to write!
Thanks so much for reading and commenting :)

azur_dreams January 31 2011, 06:56:49 UTC

this is truly adorable and funny! very thoughtful about Ulqui hiding his segunda etapa and thinking of the future. the only thing i would say is that people usually do that thing at the begining, with the rating etc. i dont know if that's required or not. haha it was good that you didnt' cuz i usually dont have time for stuff under R but i'm very glad i read this! XD

luka_valentine January 31 2011, 12:12:21 UTC

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I really think that Ulquiorra is thetype thinks an awful lot...
The thing at the beginning? There is one, but it seems that link goes straight down to the LJ cut... Thanks for reading and commenting! (I don't know if I could write R rated stuff *laugh*)

nekoaishiteru February 5 2011, 04:40:00 UTC

you know i already love Grimmjow you just made me fall in love again XD.

luka_valentine February 12 2011, 05:42:58 UTC

Sorry that this has taken so long, but thanks so much! I love Grimmjow too (I can't wait for him to come back into the manga!) XD

nekoaishiteru March 2 2011, 19:22:53 UTC

na no worries lol sorry i answered so late too ^^ but yea can't wait for him to come back too XD