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lucybun

Ficlets: Little Deaths in My Hands

Feb 15, 2011 18:49

Title: Little Deaths in My Hands
Summary: Two little prompt-fill type ficlets about masturbation. The first focuses on John, and the second on Sherlock. One is a crack fic, and the other is a PWP.
Pairing: Sherlock/John
Rating: NC-17
Spoilers: None
Word Count: Each is around 800 words
Warnings: bodily fluids, dirty talk, crack, and masturbation
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category: humor, established relationship, pairing: sherlock/john, fanworks: drabble, rating: nc-17, sherlockbbc, prompt fill, category: pwp

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lucybun February 16 2011, 01:29:15 UTC

Oh noes! I think I broke me with these. I was almost too embarrassed to post them. Almost. XD

livia_carica February 16 2011, 04:36:03 UTC

I am so glad you posted these! :D

lucybun February 16 2011, 07:04:27 UTC

Thank you for encouraging me to post. Sometimes I need some courage on loan. :D

meredydd February 16 2011, 05:01:10 UTC

Oh. My. Gods.

Both of those are not only VERY well written (I loved John's "Bathroom's all yours!" line lol) but so effin' hot! *applauds*

lucybun February 16 2011, 07:07:08 UTC

Thank you! I was afraid I might have crossed from hot to squicky with the second one. So I'm glad you thought it was hot. This is me relieved. :DDD

meredydd February 16 2011, 07:24:21 UTC

hee, no, not squicky at all.

darthhellokitty February 16 2011, 06:49:38 UTC

This is MARVELOUS - two very different versions - and they've BOTH forbidden the other to touch! You could think of the second one as a payback for the first one...

lucybun February 16 2011, 07:10:23 UTC

Thank you! And I didn't even think of it that way as I wrote them at different times in very different mindsets. There was a disconnect in my mind that you just connected for me. Would it be OK if I made a note up top that the second could be seen as a sort of sequel? I would, of course, give you credit for that brilliant idea.

darthhellokitty February 16 2011, 08:31:38 UTC

Go right ahead! :-)

lucybun February 16 2011, 08:45:39 UTC

Thank you, dear!

lawless523 February 16 2011, 07:12:07 UTC

I loved the first one, and John insisting on Sherlock not helping, except of course he totally did, just not in the hands-on way he wanted. So funny, and John's parting comment to a hopeful Sherlock was so well-deserved!

Sherlock was a sneaky tease in the second one. Actually, in both cases, Sherlock was in control; even though in the first one it was John masturbating, it was clear that it was what Sherlock said that pushed him over the edge.

lucybun February 16 2011, 07:22:57 UTC

Thank you! I guess I do tend to think of Sherlock as the dominant partner, but I think I really need to give John some time at the wheel. I'm going to have to write something where John is definitely in control. Sigh...what a chore. ;DD