Fic: I Appreciate the Sentiment

Jul 11, 2011 21:34

"Sherlock!"

"What?  I mean it.  I do.  When I get my hands on him...”

"Come here."  John scooted over in the narrow bed to allow room for Sherlock to lie next to him.

Sherlock seemed to debate the wisdom of it but eventually slid his shoes off and gingerly crawled up into the bed.  He lay his head next to John's on the pillow and rested his ( Read more... )

pairing: sherlock/john, rating: nc-17, established relationship, fanworks: fic

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Hurt my doctor, get messed up in return! jetdart1974 July 12 2011, 10:29:25 UTC
I love see sherlock get few punches in before tg police haul him away. No-one hurts John and gets a way with it. The wanker has a arsekicking coming his way. Count on it!

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Re: Hurt my doctor, get messed up in return! lucybun July 12 2011, 19:18:44 UTC
Hee! That would be nice to see. Canon Sherlock was supposed to be a good boxer (though Sherlock's skills in The Blind Banker didn't look all that impressive) so I think he might be able to get a bit of revenge. >;)

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lucybun July 12 2011, 19:19:49 UTC
It is. I don't care how enlightened you are, there is something touching about someone who'd kick some ass for you. Thank you for commenting!

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verityburns July 12 2011, 11:14:41 UTC
Wow - I love this, it's absolutely brilliant! Loads of stand out lines, several of which have already been quoted above, but I do adore John's soaking this up like a greedy little sponge, that's just perfect.

Really, really well done - gorgeous stuff :D

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lucybun July 12 2011, 19:23:19 UTC
Oh my goodness! Thank you so much! I'm a big fan of your work, so this means a lot coming from you. Seriously, I am beyond pleased that you enjoyed this. <3<3

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violetbruises July 12 2011, 11:45:22 UTC
ASFHDKFGKF YES.

I loved this bit too; "but scooted closer anyway, trying to maneuver him further into the lee of his small body. The protectiveness of the movement made Sherlock's throat hurt..."

I love them both so muchhh.

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lucybun July 13 2011, 00:18:03 UTC
Hee! I love it when ASDFJK me. Thank you!

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sabrinaphynn July 12 2011, 12:04:54 UTC
This is so made of awesomeness. I really love the banter at the end best...

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lucybun July 13 2011, 00:18:59 UTC
Thank you very much! I've been trying to work on the banter between them and do a better job of getting it right. I'm glad you liked that part!

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