Comments | lucy_locket: Fic: Want

lucy_locket

Fic: Want

Jan 10, 2009 22:56

Lol omg I have fic again. I wasn't going to write for this prompt, but then I started on the booze and this one popped into my head. Probably shit because of the booze, but I hope you like it.

Title: Want
Rating: NC-17
Characters/Pairing: Jack, Ianto, Jack/Ianto
Spoilers: None.
Disclaimer: Don't own it blah blah.
Note: Written for Day Ten at redismycolour. This one's ( Read more... )

redismycolour, fic, jack & jones

Comments 44

forgiveninasong January 10 2009, 23:25:43 UTC

Um......
I just died.

That was so fucking brilliant, hun. Loved it. You always manage to capture Jack and Ianto's relationship *so* well. I've not found anyone else who portrays their relationship like this, and it's pretty much how I see it.

“You expect me to make you hot chocolate right now?” Ianto grumbled. “Whatever happened to enjoying the afterglow?”

“But I've already given you your reward,” pouted Jack. “It'd be rude to deny me now.”

This bit made me LOL.

♥♥ Completely loved it!

xxx

lucy_locket January 10 2009, 23:42:06 UTC

Aww *hugs* you flatter me too much, hehe. There are so many writers who portray their relationship better then I do *blush*

Lol I'm a bit drunk, am I hiding it well?

forgiveninasong January 10 2009, 23:45:34 UTC

Doing very well! CONGRATS!

I however, am hiding my drunk level less well than you! This is when I'm glad that Microsoft Word has a spellchecking function!

I don't think it will recognise some of the filth I'm about to write though....

lucy_locket January 10 2009, 23:46:32 UTC

Yay let the filth pour from your fingers!

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lefaym January 10 2009, 23:35:49 UTC

Oh, that was brilliantly hot, and you've got their voices so right. Well done.

lucy_locket January 10 2009, 23:43:04 UTC

Aww *blush* I am beyond thrilled that you think that. Thanks :)

forgiveninasong January 10 2009, 23:55:34 UTC

I have endless love for that icon. Their faces, I could watch it all day.

morphine300mg January 10 2009, 23:38:51 UTC

Bottom drawer sequel, y/y?

lucy_locket January 10 2009, 23:43:57 UTC

Lol best icon evar!

Never say never I suppose ;)

luvinthe88and20 January 10 2009, 23:39:27 UTC

Very Nice Darlin, If your interested I have my 1st fic up.

lucy_locket January 10 2009, 23:44:39 UTC

Thanks hun. I'll go over and read it when I'm less intoxicated, hehe.

rosy_dawn January 10 2009, 23:47:55 UTC

see icon...

booze and writing is clearly a good combination!

lucy_locket January 10 2009, 23:51:38 UTC

Luce would so hit that icon....in a sexy way you understand..not like a punch. Unless she asked for it.

Thanks babes.

rosy_dawn January 10 2009, 23:53:45 UTC

haha, pervy Rose totally approves of this sentiment.