Done for 10k_drabbles

Aug 05, 2006 23:26

Zacharias/Luna pairing (what else? ;p). 100 words. PG-13. And as usual, I own nothing.

Loser's LurgyZacharias and Luna lay in bed, Luna curled up in the curve that Zacharias’s arm created. The former was wearing a self-satisfied smirk. The latter’s eyes were widened to the size of saucers and she was struggling to catch her breath. The former ( Read more... )

zacharias, hufflepuff, fanfiction, pairing fic, drabble, ravenclaw, luna

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nentari August 5 2006, 12:05:14 UTC
*giggles* Oh, I love it - especially Luna's little explosion at the end :)

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lucy_lapine August 5 2006, 12:16:12 UTC
Thanks. I wanted to work that "Loser's Lurgy" comment into something for ages, and I never would have thought I'd find room for in it a 100 word drabble :D

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hermione_like August 5 2006, 12:09:23 UTC
Hee! :D I'm so glad you claimed that pairing. :D

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lucy_lapine August 5 2006, 12:15:11 UTC
I think the majority of my flist would have comfortably placed a large sum of money on what pairing I'd end up choosing ;p

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pennswoods August 5 2006, 12:52:17 UTC
Squeeeee!!!

I love their very extreme reactions to the aftermath. So cute!

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lucy_lapine August 5 2006, 12:56:20 UTC
Thanks *g* I decided that with 100 words exactly to work with, the reactions had to be pretty extreme.

Incidentally, have you done this challenge yet? I'd be curious to see what you might come up with.

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pennswoods August 5 2006, 13:32:42 UTC
That's got to be sooooo hard! I've actually never written a drabble in my life and don't know that I could.

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lucy_lapine August 5 2006, 13:34:56 UTC
It's actually not too bad. You just have to stick to a simple scenario (I based mine around the "Loser's Lurgy" one-liner) and play around with the wording if necessary.

I noticed your comment on my other journal, so I'll add you and link you to the pictures once I've logged into that account.

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me_fein August 5 2006, 13:42:29 UTC
LOL I agree with nentari - the explosion is great! :) This is really good!

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lucy_lapine August 5 2006, 13:47:07 UTC
Thank you. I based the entire drabble off that line :)

Incidentally I'm definitely planning on reading your original fiction. I've just been busy and sleep-deprived lately so I want to wait until I'm rested enough to properly take it in and provide decent feedback on it.

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