I love this start :D It's absolutely perfect. I like how you've introduced the different characters and the relations and feelings that we can already read and guess.
If you ever want to write more, I would definitely read it :D
Also, you're English is not bad at all. If you're interested in a beta I could try and do it. English is not my first language either but I've been living in London for more than two years now.
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I like how you've introduced the different characters and the relations and feelings that we can already read and guess.
If you ever want to write more, I would definitely read it :D
Also, you're English is not bad at all. If you're interested in a beta I could try and do it. English is not my first language either but I've been living in London for more than two years now.
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