How We Move [Castle/Beckett]

[shimmeryshine]

how we move
She’s wearing a see through top and a pair of eyes made liquid, lined in charcoal when he knocks on her door for the first time after.
castle/beckett - nc-17
a/n: SPOILERS FOR 5.01! (Sneaks, stills, general spoilery things). For Nancy because weird things make her happy jk jk I luv u. Written at like 4am, so you know what that means

Comments

[changinandhow]

youuuuuu light up my liiiiiiiiiiiiiiiife

[shimmeryshine]

NO U

[sparkles_mouse]

YES. Pre lunch porn. It's a good day

[sparkles_mouse]

His palms find their way down her lower back and over the pockets of her black jeans, cupping her sharply and pulling her against him, making her gasp. - MMMMM SO HOTTTTT

[shimmeryshine]

<333

[sonni89]

I'm technically on vacation and super behind on everything on the internet, but I just had to quickly read this and stop by to tell you how fantastic I think this was!!!! BECAUSE IT WAS. I love everything about it, but particularly the way he reacts to her at the beginning of the story when she rolls her eyes at him - I love every single word you chose for the sole reason that I didn't even have to think about it, it just played out in front of my eyes as if it were an actual episode (AND IN LESS THAN TWO WEEKS IT MIGHT ACTUALLY PLAY OUT LIKE THAT, HELPPP) and ugh, just. THIS IS SO GREAT!!!!!

[shimmeryshine]

Haha aw thanks for reading even if you're on vacation from the internet!! FLATTERED. :DDD

[xdawnfirex]

Ohhhh my god that is hot and fantastic.

I have one quibble: You used the phrase "taught skin". "Taught" is the past tense of "teach." The word you're looking for is "taut." (I wouldn't have even noticed if it wasn't one of my grammatic pet peeves.)

Seriously, though, this was AMAZING. Thank you for posting it.

[shimmeryshine]

Omg ack thank you for pointing out that error! I know the difference but I constantly use the wrong taught/taut and I NEVER CATCH IT.

And also glad you liked it! :)

[xdawnfirex]

Oh P.S. I just read this again and it was even hotter the second time WTF.

[shimmeryshine]

Lmao aldsfkjas you read it TWO times? :')))))

[sadpie]

n o p e. i reject this.

“Just a second!” she yells toward the door, dragging her fingers over her own lips as she tugs her shirt down, trying to erase any sign of his presence on her body. It makes him growl a little bit, feel possessive. He wants her so, so badly. - love that.

He nods too many times, reaches out to casually lean against the closest hard surface he can find, immediately slips on his sweaty palm, barely manages to catch himself before he completely face plants on her living room floor. He hops up quickly, wiping his palms on the front of his jeans as he gets straight again and resumes casually looking like he didn’t just have his tongue down her throat. - ugh i love you. and i can't wait for something like this to play out on screen.

“Have you ever thought about this?” she muses, almost to herself as she lets her palms press up over the tops of his thighs, her thumbs grazing him through two layers of fabric that may as well not even be there at all. He wishes they weren’t there but he thinks he could feel her

[shimmeryshine]

hehe glad to be the worst xoxo

THANKS FOR READING <33