Charlie [Castle/Beckett]

Aug 16, 2012 21:23

charlie
“Wait,” he says, gathering back his usual level of self possession. “How do you know about that thing with the ice cubes?” He stops, turns to Beckett. “How does she know?”

“Who do you think she learned it from?”
castle/beckett - hard r? (and a little bit of bisexual beckett lol)
a/n: Inspired by this post on tumblr for the guest starring ( Read more... )

fic: castle, fic: castle/beckett

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shimmeryshine August 17 2012, 01:44:49 UTC
lmfao kewl first reply katie

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anonymous August 17 2012, 01:40:25 UTC
you're so great at keeping C & B in character and this was totally hot. Love it. You should write more fics with Charlie. ;)

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shimmeryshine August 17 2012, 02:50:29 UTC
Thank you!

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airbefore August 17 2012, 01:57:04 UTC
UGH

Just... UGH

This is so good and I want to hate you for it but I can't because it's amazing and hilarious and even though the feminist in me wants to be pissed about Castle's male privilege I can't because it's just so him and so innocent and because he wants to know her not own her and yes she did it and she LIKED and... ugh. Fuck you, man, for being so awesome at this.

In conclusion: this was hot and ILY

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shimmeryshine August 17 2012, 02:49:37 UTC
even though the feminist in me wants to be pissed about Castle's male privilege I can't because it's just so him and so innocent and because he wants to know her not own her
I know I was feeling squiggly as I was writing this, that I would feel the same way if it was anyone else, but he sincerely just wants to know everything about her, it's not just because Charlie is another woman. I mean I'm SURE that peaked extra interest, but he was basically this intrusive about her relationship with Will when he was around too, so. HE'S JUST CASTLE. Idk. But anyway, I hope it truly didn't come off as offensive!

Thank you for readinggggggg <33

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airbefore August 17 2012, 03:13:41 UTC
Honestly, if this was any other character (or written by anyone other than you), I'd have major problems with it. As a woman that identifies as a lesbian, it kinda makes me ragey when men act like my sex life exists solely to fuel their personal fantasies. But this doesn't feel like that. Yes, the fact that she was with a woman turned him on but that was really a very small part of the whole. He was driven by his need to know her, to understand her, not his lust at the mere thought of her having sex with another woman (well, not entirely). Also, a very large part of what made this work for me, aside from it just being true to character for him, was the way you let Beckett be easy and open about it. She wasn't ashamed or coy, she didn't use alcohol or teenage exploration as an excuse. She owned it as something that she did because she wanted to and because she LIKED it. They both enjoyed his curiosity, were both turned on by it. And that's fucking awesome, Heather. I really do love this. The writing is top notch, the dialogue and ( ... )

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shimmeryshine August 17 2012, 03:38:03 UTC
THANK YOU FOR ASSUAGING MY WORRIES WITH ALL OF YOUR WORDS HAVE I TOLD YOU LATELY I LOVE YOU A LOT?

Because I do.

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fanficjunkie12 August 17 2012, 02:14:31 UTC
Dood. I love you right now.

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shimmeryshine August 17 2012, 02:49:52 UTC
No I love YOUUUU!

Thank you for reading :))

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ghostwriterlost August 17 2012, 02:27:57 UTC
I'd shoot any guy who acted this way - i don't find it charming - but i know lots of women who would. However, it is Castle up, down and sideways so kudos to you. I do adore Beckett and your Beckett captures the many facets of Beckettness - all of them seriously hot.

Thanks. Now to sleep with visions of wild-child Beckett (& Charlie) dancing in my head. *g*

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shimmeryshine August 17 2012, 02:45:03 UTC
I mean, yes to any guy that acted this way simply because it was another woman, but I really think Castle just wants to know everything about her, sincerely. He's just more over the top about literally everything when it comes to her, doesn't really matter what. He did the same thing when Will was around! But I'm glad you thought it was Castle, regardless of if you'd shoot him! haha

Thanks for reading!

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