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lucky_sparkle

Fic stuffs

Mar 30, 2009 00:20

Tiny Watchmen fic? Why yesss!

This is sort of a practice fic, playing around with fairly unfamiliar characters and whatnot.

Tell me how I did?

Title: Enough
Rating: PG-13 ish. I spy a naughty word.
Characters/Pairing: Sally Jupiter, Sally/Eddie aka Silk Spectre/The Comedian
Disclaimer: So totally and utterly not even close to being mine.

( They’ll lie. No one will have to know - with the obvious exception. )

sally/eddie, watchmen, sally jupiter, fic

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lucky_sparkle March 30 2009, 12:48:10 UTC

Thank you. I'm glad you liked! :D

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lucky_sparkle March 30 2009, 12:49:06 UTC

:D Thank you for reading! I'm glad you liked it.
I hope I can write more, these two are fun!

starwriterlv March 30 2009, 00:42:28 UTC

That's great! Yuo really caught me up with how you wrote this!

Now...I know this going to sound really picky...but I thought you were going to end it with her seeing Laurie talking to Eddie. I would have loved to see that!

Otherwise...fantastic job! I forgot to add...please write some more Eddie/Sally fic

lucky_sparkle March 30 2009, 12:50:44 UTC

Thank you!

Ending on that had never even crossed my mind - but now you've pointed it out I'm thinking it would have ended it very nicely. Damn.

monalily March 30 2009, 02:44:48 UTC

I love it! Great job keeping them in character while still managing to bring across how much they want each other. I also loved how you used the movieverse.

lucky_sparkle March 30 2009, 12:52:27 UTC

:D Thank you! I was so worried about the characterisation so I'm glad you think it worked.

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lucky_sparkle March 30 2009, 12:53:37 UTC

Thank you for your comment.

That bit was my favourite so I'm glad you pointed out that you liked it! :D