You're very much welcomed! I totally understand how you feel about needing feedbacks to be certain that you did something right. But I remind myself that I write for me, and people who stumble upon my fics and take the time to read it, not just for the approval of others. So long as I know I worked my hardest, it's all good =)
Me thinks that Eric/Ryan fics with more actions that words are wonderful in their own right. It's in the way it's written and I say this isn't bad at all! I enjoyed the ache, because I like to torture myself that way *nyahaha..*
I like more action than words, but it may be more of a stage I am going through, learning how to tell a story where how someone reacts is just as telling as what he says or does not say.
And what's going on with your life that you are so busy you can't write? I'd be pulling my hair out if I couldn't escape into my writing world a little bit each day.
Well, I'm working, so I'm pretty much beat by the time I get home. Not to say that I don't skive off to sneak a few sentences into my notebook during work because I can't stand not writing too haha...
Ah, it's this one! I read this on... *thinks* AdultFanFiction? I loved it, but I can't comment there because I'm not a member, just a lurker.
I loved the imagery. Brown skin, white skin, white sheets... And no words... I can so imagine their relationship being like this. That's one of the reasons that I love these two - they can be non-communicative or fluffy or aggresssive and it still feels right.
yes I posted it on AFF, lots of readers but hardly anyone cares to comment, sigh and I so live for feedback. Yeah that's one of the reasons I like them so much too, they are wonderfully complex characters and it's nice to have that room to play and know you are still showing them as they are. Or at least the way they are in the slash world, lol.
Did you post it on WolfeDelko? There would be lots of appreciative readers there. And csi slash, and Nerds With Badges... And ericnryan. There are links to all of those on my profile page.
I find that there is more feedback here than there is on CSIForensics. And AFF might discourage comments because you have to be logged in - you can't leave anonymous comments.
I'll check the links out, I've been lurking in wolfe/delko, but haven't seen the other groups. Bad feedback has left a lot of people with the sour grapes feeling. But if I don't like something I just keep my opinion to myself and remind myself that it's a free world and if I don't like it I don't have to read it.
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My heart ached for those two.
Words can only say so much, beyond that, one has to learn to read between every line and action.
Not full-out angst, but still good angst.
Good job!
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It was hard to write a story that centered more on actions and no words than one would imagine and I am truly glad you enjoyed it!!!
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Me thinks that Eric/Ryan fics with more actions that words are wonderful in their own right. It's in the way it's written and I say this isn't bad at all! I enjoyed the ache, because I like to torture myself that way *nyahaha..*
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And what's going on with your life that you are so busy you can't write? I'd be pulling my hair out if I couldn't escape into my writing world a little bit each day.
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I loved the imagery. Brown skin, white skin, white sheets... And no words... I can so imagine their relationship being like this. That's one of the reasons that I love these two - they can be non-communicative or fluffy or aggresssive and it still feels right.
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I find that there is more feedback here than there is on CSIForensics. And AFF might discourage comments because you have to be logged in - you can't leave anonymous comments.
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Pity more don't take that mantra to heart.
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