Updated Fic: Agnihotri, Chapter 2, NC17

[lucilla_darkate]

Title: Agnihotri
Fandom: Xmen: movie-verse
Pairing: Pyro/Rogue
Rated: NC17
Warnings: Spoilers for all films eventually, language, sex, naughty things with ice cream ;)
Notes: Original prompt was the_dark_garden challenge #145 "Kisses are a better fate than wisdom."~E. E. Cummings. But I've gone and gotten a tid bit carried away so it probably doesn't apply

Comments

Whoa..

[spfizz]

Damn!

Awesome-ness...
I can't wait for the next bit..!

;)

[ashnan_etana]

Oh yeah! It's 98 degrees here and after reading this, I swear the temperature just shot up another twenty degrees. Can't wait for the next part!

[lucilla_darkate]

You know, concrit itself doesn't bother me. It's the waiting I just can't stand ;)

Thank you for this, though, really. You have some very valid points, and yes, I am going to use some of it.

About the southern belle thing though, I think as long as she only curses during moments of distress, I can be forgiven. I used to live in the south and I knew a couple of 'southern belles'. They can curse with the best of us when they want to, and nine times out of ten, they'll say 'shit' when they stub their toe:D

That aside, I think I can rewrite the finger licking thing to make it work better and be more believable. And yes, UST is love ♥

[elektrik_storm]

eee... not a shipper of this pairing normally but i love it! it is great and i can't wait for more! very very hot [duh]

[lucilla_darkate]

Thanks. I'm glad you liked it.

[bardsgrl4evr]

I stumbled across this truly by accident and it blew me away. I mean, WoW! Incredible stuff, do you do this type of writing regularly or was this kind of a one time thing? Again, great work. I look forward to reading some of your other pieces, if you've got any lying around.

Ciao,
Crys

[lucilla_darkate]

Gonna tell you, my first reaction to this was, are you for fucking real?

No, this is not a one time thing. I do this fairly frequently. However, I'm rather new to the Xmen fandom, so if you're an old hand, you won't have seen me around. I write predominantly in the Harry Potter fandom and have for quite a while, but a friend of mine is winning me over.

Feel free to check through my LJ if you want. Fic is pretty much the only thing not f-locked so it should be easy to find.

[kultiras]

Dear Lord. This was HOT. And I can't wait for the next chapter. *leans forward* And that last line? Abso-f***in-lutely Perfect.

[lucilla_darkate]

Ha! Thank you. I'm glad you like it so far.