To Pray is to Redeem

Apr 28, 2007 19:23

You stare at the figure, the insignia, the symbol-the Divinity on the opposite wall. Drunken whispers fill your ears. False lies or false hopes? You do not know. You close your eyes tightly. You are not religious yet here you are, finding yourself starting a prayer you only heard others whisper under their breaths on the battle front. For a moment ( Read more... )

post: fan fiction, character: roy mustang, community: magna_opera, character: maes hughes, fandom: fullmetal alchemist, rating: r, misc: contest

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tresa_cho May 6 2007, 02:32:16 UTC
Wow. Just... amazing. Your prose was astounding, and the situation was just brilliantly plotted.

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nendoroids May 6 2007, 05:56:07 UTC
Holy....excuse the pun, but that was just god damn amazing. I'm left speechless. Wonderful work once again!

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rhapsodyangel May 6 2007, 18:22:32 UTC
*slowly releases held breath*

Wow.

I want more.

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secretfreaky May 7 2007, 13:29:25 UTC
Guh, my brain just melted. Terrific story! The religious aspect just adds to the smarminess and the poignancy. Very well written!

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ladyshadowphyre May 8 2007, 17:45:57 UTC
~fervent~ Amen.

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