Chaos in Tangles

Feb 28, 2007 11:07

Title: Chaos in Tangles
Author: luciferhisaki
Rating: PG
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Pairing: Roy Mustang/Edward Elric/Alphonse Elric
Summary: Roy choked on hair...
Disclaimer: You do not have a legal suit. So don't even try.
Notes: Beta'd by freaky_zero, my beloved hubby on LJ. ♥ Post-Alphonse restoration and AU-esque. ;p

Chaos in Tangles )

character: alphonse elric, rating: pg, post: fan fiction, character: roy mustang, fandom: fullmetal alchemist, character: edward elric

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caitlinneko March 1 2007, 12:03:54 UTC
*Feeds*
Really loved this. A very sweet fic, and...argh...I'm bad at reviews and comments.
Roy/Ed/Al is always a good pairing. x3
whatever. I loved it. Good on you ^^.

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binaryalchemist March 1 2007, 14:14:38 UTC
Ahhhh...lovely! Roy filling an Elric sandwich. But seriously, it's so tender, it really touched my heart. What a perfect way for Roy to leave this world, cradled between two suns.

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*Faints from the love* gucci84 March 1 2007, 18:00:27 UTC
God this was good! So sweet and quiet. My ears adapted to the setting of the moment and now I'm hearing all the noises I wasn't while reading. LOVED IT! I can so picture Roy with longer hair too. *DROOLS!*

I'd LOVE both Elric brothers sandwitching me like that. Roy is SO lucky.

I'm glad you think this way and posted it for us. :D

Keep it up!

-Gucci

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hikaru_9 March 2 2007, 01:28:33 UTC
That was rather sweet, i do think you overused the 'twin suns' a bit, but it was a good image and the Golden rain gave them a 'savior like' feel as far as Roy sees them.

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grass_angel March 2 2007, 13:17:38 UTC
Wonderfully warm and feeling.

Although, I really wouldn't think their hair is that unmanageable. Or that long.

Despite that naggy point, I do love all the hair love.

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