Comments | lucifercircle: DS Fanfic

lucifercircle

DS Fanfic

Mar 31, 2006 18:40

Okay - here goes my first and so far only attempt at Fanfiction.

Sex And Love In One Act
It's Due South, Fraser/Ray K, NC-17 (I.E No Pants), No warnings (Except slash, of course!) Basically PWP, the title is the summary and I don't own any of this.

Right, lets see if I can get this LJ cut thing to work. *Rolls up sleeves.*

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slash, fanfiction, due south, fraser/kowalski

Comments 5

ultra_chrome August 5 2006, 09:00:28 UTC

MMM...this is hotness. Possibly even times a million. :)

Girl, you can seriously write!

lucifercircle August 6 2006, 17:35:47 UTC

Thank you! I was't sure about this fic, since I had no beta and I'm always iffy when I write anything with dialog in it. I'm glad you think it's hot too, I really can't judge the hotness level of my own writing objectively - I think it sounds stilted.

gournay December 14 2006, 11:28:51 UTC

Aw... It's just, just sooo PERFECT! That is definitely Ray and Ben. All you have to do is read it and you will see that. Hm, it was a pure PWP but so full of love I would like to call it for something else.
I especially like the fact that you don't use "Benton's POW" to mark Benton's part. I hope you know what I mean. I have a personal vendetta against "POW" marks.

lucifercircle December 14 2006, 17:30:59 UTC

I'm really glad you enjoyed it and that you thought it was in character. This is the first fanfic that I ever wrote (and the first smut I ever wrote) and it's nice to find that people are enjoying it.

ride_4ever June 25 2018, 16:40:57 UTC

This was your first fic and this was your first sexy fic?! Damn, a super-talented and insightful writer right from the start. I <3 the way you handled the shifting POV's, I <3 the hotness and how the love shines through along with the sex, and I <3 how clear you make it that these boys are OTP.