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Déjà vu (Dean Gen.)

Nov 28, 2007 11:57

Title: Déjà vu
Author: Lisa
Status: Completed Double Drabble (200 words)
Rating: PG
Fandom: SPN
Pairing: N/A
Genre: Drama/Action
Summary: Déjà vu: a feeling of already having experienced the present situation.
Challenge: Request filled for exposed1 at spn_thur_nights

Comments 17

stars91 November 28 2007, 19:51:51 UTC

Very well done! I love the attention to details, especially the Earnhardt night light! *G*

Great job sweetie! Thank you so much for participating in this community! I really appreciate it!

exposed1 November 28 2007, 20:52:54 UTC

The Earnhardt was my little bit of homage to the late and great "The Intimidator" and it suited young Dean along with the time-frame. Look at me doing NASCAR research! *grins*

Thanks for the feedback sweetie, lovely that I got some good detail in there as it's something I'm always trying to improve on.

Glad my muse finally allowed me to write something for the community! *hugs*

wilwarin1 November 28 2007, 22:07:09 UTC

Loved the going back and forth between Stanford and Lawrence, cause yeah, the same signs would have been at both places.

Wow, creepy, but awesome ficlet!!

exposed1 November 28 2007, 22:39:37 UTC

I tried to draw comparisons from Dean's POV. Glad that it worked to more than just me but to you, the reader.

Creepy is awesome! Thanks so much for reading and leaving feedback, much appreciated!

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exposed1 November 28 2007, 22:40:09 UTC

Thanks so much, glad you enjoyed. Appreciate the feedback!

starrylizard November 28 2007, 22:24:28 UTC

Nicely done! :)

exposed1 November 28 2007, 22:42:54 UTC

Appreciate the feedback and excited to know that you enjoyed!

moire2 November 28 2007, 22:40:05 UTC

This, in particular, I like: The scene started off like it had twenty-two years before. Lights flickering in the same daunting manner as they had when he was only four. Then, he’d been curled up in bed watching his Earnhardt night light switch on and off, scared that another tornado was coming. Worried about Sammy.

Two complicated sentences punctuated by a short one. The short, direct bit being the most important thing to Dean, stands out.

Lovely work! Wonderful details and great scene.

exposed1 November 28 2007, 22:41:51 UTC

That was an evil bit to get right. To state what I wanted without, beating the information into the reader. *grins* Which is what we were just talking about. Glad it came across and that the sentence variation adds that punch.

*kisses* Always appreciate your feedback and input. Thanks so much for the wonderful feedback. Truly, honestly appreciate it.