Comments | luciamalfoy: Chapter 04

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Chapter 04 - White

Jun 27, 2006 01:03

Title.: Corvus et Serenus ( Read more... )

Comments 6

milomymilo June 28 2006, 20:49:06 UTC

''Work' them out of his system'! Uh, that's great! Love the way they're slowly getting more and more intimate. So cute - and very promising... ;)

luciamalfoy June 29 2006, 00:03:37 UTC

Haha! ^-^ Thanks, I knew you would like it.

It's all about seduction, though I cannot decide if I should let Luce have his way with Sev, whil Sev is underage or to skip slowly a few Year everytime. :\
We will see, when time comes. :D

youko_slytherin June 29 2006, 05:06:22 UTC

Oh, I can't wait for Lucius to 'deflower' Sev! ^O^

luciamalfoy June 29 2006, 06:04:00 UTC

Thank you, and how he will. *lol* Severus will be very happy about it! ;)

severus79 June 30 2006, 11:02:52 UTC

I finally managed to read it and I must say absolutely amazing! The only mistake I came across was almost at the end 'font'(which is a letter type) instead of 'fond'(takinga like or shine to).
Your writing has improved so much, excellent!

luciamalfoy June 30 2006, 18:01:10 UTC

Nooo!!! Thank you so much *doh*, for telling me. Right now, I am blushing so hard, thanks noone can see me. XD *runs off to change it*

And thank you for the encouragement, I am not so self-confident when writing in english.