Das war sehr schön!(is that even remotely correct?) Wonderful! Those bloody Marauders, I hope Lucius - or Filch by proxy gives them Hell to pay. Young Severus is still so lovable in his self consciousness. God, I wanna hug him. And the bathing scene is simply sweet and tender - and quite promising. Now they've been naked together. Yay! ;)
Ja, rigtig. *giggle* Oh, how I hate the marauders sometimes. I hate bullies. They didn't even know Severus, yet they had to hurt him. :( They have been naked and it seems as if Luce could even feel something poking(?) at back. It's all about the fantasy.
The next Chapter is going to be White, but I will actually let slip a few weeks between that evening and 'White'. Since nothing significant happened. I don't know yet, I have written 500 words already, but they could be changed in time right now.
God yes, the poking in the back. Quite spicy. It would seem that young Severus has a bit of problem restricting himself. But hey, being naked in a bathtub with Lucius Malfoy would have me going, too ;)
I'll be looking forward to 'White'...
Love the avatar! Could that boy possibly be any hotter? Just wondering.
The insignificant amount of German that I know is from when I went to school, but how come you know any Danish words at all? Do you live near the boarder or something? :)
The first Time I wrote about chan, I asked a friend who is absolute into Biology, if it is even possible for a boy under 13 to get an erection, but well i fact both gender can get aroused 'very' early, so yeah, I made out of Sev a little horny boy. Like you say, it's just because of sexy Luc. :D
Tom is a little Shmex-bomb, he is! XD
Wow, in Denmark you can learn German in School? I didn't know. Well I don't live near Denmark, but a very good friend of mine is infatuated with languages, so she pestered me a very big time and now I am into them as well, though I just know some phrases, like Hello, please, thank you and my name is... But it's fun to be semi-multi-lingual.
Hmm. Wonder where you are? You've been gone for nearly two months now, please know that you are greatly missed. Besides, I'm still waiting for that next chapter... No, no pressure, just come back to lj ;)
Sorry, was gone, had some trouble, kicked some butts, got my net back (let's see for how long). Now I need a beta, 'cause I want to work the storyline into perfection. Whatever! i think tomorrow I can post again. Sorry dear for letting you wait.
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Oh, how I hate the marauders sometimes. I hate bullies. They didn't even know Severus, yet they had to hurt him. :(
They have been naked and it seems as if Luce could even feel something poking(?) at back. It's all about the fantasy.
The next Chapter is going to be White, but I will actually let slip a few weeks between that evening and 'White'. Since nothing significant happened. I don't know yet, I have written 500 words already, but they could be changed in time right now.
Here, I thought you would love this Draco-Avatar. It's a simple one, but hmm. Who knows. ;) http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/30925713/
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I'll be looking forward to 'White'...
Love the avatar! Could that boy possibly be any hotter? Just wondering.
The insignificant amount of German that I know is from when I went to school, but how come you know any Danish words at all? Do you live near the boarder or something? :)
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Tom is a little Shmex-bomb, he is! XD
Wow, in Denmark you can learn German in School? I didn't know.
Well I don't live near Denmark, but a very good friend of mine is infatuated with languages, so she pestered me a very big time and now I am into them as well, though I just know some phrases, like Hello, please, thank you and my name is...
But it's fun to be semi-multi-lingual.
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I will write again, since I have my net-connection back. :)
Sorry for the long waiting, I expect to upload tomorrow the next chapter. ;)
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But live sucked major the last weeks. :(
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