TITLE: A Simple Misunderstanding
AUTHOR lucia2309
RECIPIENT: briaranise
GENRE: Romance
PAIRING(S): USUK, UKCan, hints of minor side-pairs.
RATINGS/WARNINGS: PG
SUMMARY: Matthew has been distracted of late by a newly opened pastry shop, so Alfred takes the time to investigate. He sees his brother chatting with another man, but is this date really what
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Comments 6
Despite me liking a jealous!Arthur, a jealous!Alfred is just as cute as well! And imagine him, getting jealous over his own brother! It's really funny!
But omg Alfred's dream of a very sweaty and dedicated Arthur kneading the dough's hilarious as well!
Please, I want to see them kiss, you know! >u<
This is very cute!
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The bread scene was sort of a last minute thing I'd wanted to include, but felt was too silly. I gave in at the end. Couldn't help myself, so I'm glad someone enjoyed by bad innuendo. xD
As for the kiss, I don't make any promises, but I do have an omake idea floating in my head.
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This story is so much more than I could have ever hoped for. It's the perfect combination of silly, fluffy, dorky and just plain cute. I can't find the words to express how much I love this story.
Alfred was adorable, guiltily crushing on his brother's supposed date. I'm really happy with how you ended this, also! I loved the way that they didn't fall in love too quickly, and how this story merely showed the beginning of their relationship.
In short, I really loved this story. Thank you so much for writing this for me! <3
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It kind of escalated pretty quickly after that.
I'm glad you didn't mind the lack of any kissing, since I do see this as just the beginning of a crush for Alfred. In fact, I've been thinking about writing out their first date, since I hurried the ending because of time constraints, but college has dried me out of ideas.
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I definitely don't mind the lack of kissing, but I would love to see their first date -- once college has stopped sucking the life out of everyone, that is!
Thank you, once again! :)
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