Comments | lttledvl_writes: Drabble...?

lttledvl_writes

Drabble...?

Jul 31, 2007 10:30

Yah, right *snorts* I thought it was going to be a drabble, apparently the muse had other ideas. Guess she's on a kick of the serious type since that seems to be what I'm currently throwing out there lately. One of these days, I swear I'll be able to write something that's less than a mile long... Oh well, as long as it keeps you guys happy, I'm ( Read more... )

sky tate, jack landors

Comments 8

scifislasher July 31 2007, 19:53:19 UTC

Very nice. :) This is a conversation I can really see them having, including setting each other off without realising it.

lttledvl_writes July 31 2007, 22:50:37 UTC

Thankies! It hit me last night before bed and it was still with me when I got up and since it seemed persistant...well I just had to write it up.

Glad you liked it!

daylightfire August 1 2007, 04:23:54 UTC

Wonderful. Such a great, deep Sky/Jack moment. I love the image of them 'dead asleep in the middle of the common room'. :)

lttledvl_writes August 1 2007, 04:27:44 UTC

Thank you! I liked that image of them too :)

Glad you liked it!

kikos_ai August 1 2007, 04:48:04 UTC

Indeed very nice. There's a nice depth to their conversation that is really sweet and touching. Like everyone else I love how they fall asleep together on the couch. Awww.

I <3.

lttledvl_writes August 1 2007, 04:54:57 UTC

It just seemed to 'fit' at the end given the conversation.

As much as I enjoy the slash scenes, sometimes it's nice to really get into their heads and have them relate purely as friends.

Thanks for the comment!

welleg_fic August 13 2007, 18:10:02 UTC

Great story. If I'd found them sleeping in the common room, I'd be tempted to snuggle up to one (or both) of them - but that's the way my mind works.

lttledvl_writes September 6 2007, 20:52:11 UTC

How did I miss this comment? I'll bet I know - sometimes lj sends notices to my bulk mail folder and they get lost in the 100s of spam.

I'm glad you liked it!

If I'd found them sleeping in the common room, I'd be tempted to snuggle up to one (or both) of them.

I don't think you'd be the only one. The only problem I'd have would be in choosing who to snuggle with. They just had to choose seperate sofas...aghh!