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[ltcoljsheppard]

Title: Ask Me No Secrets, I'll Tell You No Lies
Author: ltcoljsheppard
Rating:  R, slash
Pair:    Sheppard/Lorne, with guest Radek Zelenka
Email: ltcoljsheppard@yahoo.com
Word count: 4,350
Disclaimer: Don't own the known characters you recognize or anything regarding Stargate Atlantis. No profit is made from this story, it's just for fun and fan

Comments

[whiteraven1606]

Hi,

I figured I'd mention it before anyone else gets after you... Your lj-cut didn't work right (happens to me a lot).

When you edit your entry, go to the html view and hunt down and move it to the end of your entry or where ever you want the cut to end. If you just type that in it'll use the first instance and you still won't have a working cut. If you can't get the html tab to work message me (or email at whiteraven16 @ gmail.com) and I'll walk you through the dragging the gray box around. (If you need help. I'm just offering because no one explained crap to me until about my eighth post, not because I think you can't figure it out yourself.)

Now about the story...While this isn't a pairing I usually read, I liked how you write. The characters work and very little sounds forced. Very nice.

[whiteraven1606]

Sorry, it made the html tag go away. :P In brackets you'll see lj-cut and that's what you want to move along with the brackets on each side.

[sherry57]

A good actor can act different types of roles and I suppose the equivelent is a writer who can write different types of stories. Congrats because this story is equally as good as the innocent story of John and JT discussing where love comes from. Mind you, I suppose in this story, John is the innocent one - maybe not so different after all? Thaqnks for a couple of nice reads. Now I'm off to discover what else you offer the reader for their enjoyment.

[ltcoljsheppard]

Wow I really appreciate that. What a great compliment, thank you. I do try to stretch myself when someone challenges me to do something different from my norm and I'm glad you understand that it's a wonderful exercise for creativity and understanding... even exploration.

I sometimes get comments from readers that the slash fic confuses them as to where my interests as a writer and fan lay. I don't quite understand that as these are simply introspective moments, sort of like "what ifs" in the lives of these characters. Who is to say how they would react if the given situation was presented. I like the challenge of allowing them to find out.

Thank you very much for the compliment and taking the time to leave me feedback. It's wholly appreciated. - John