Everything For You, another from Astrotrain & Cobweb

Apr 06, 2008 13:12


Universe: loosely G1 cartoon. Sequel to Anything You Like and Something About You, contains foreshadowing for the episode Triple Takeover.

Rated: R for physical intimacy between mechanical beings, including plug-n-play.

Pairing: Astrotrain/Cobweb.

Author's Notes: Only Cobweb (nicknamed 'Enny') is mine, all else belong to corporations. ( Read more... )

astrotrain, mile high, cobweb, fanfiction

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__wilderness__ April 6 2008, 19:32:04 UTC
Have I ever told you how much I love it when you write Astrotrain?
I love the insight into their relationship... and the link to Triple Takeover.

Fantastic!

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lstarrunner April 6 2008, 21:35:55 UTC
Glad you liked! Even more, I'm glad you find I do Astrotrain justice.

Thank you for letting me know.

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mmouse15 April 7 2008, 01:49:16 UTC
You mean the challenge WASN'T written for Astrotrain and Enny?

Damn. You've just killed all my expectations...

Srsly, it's wonderful. I really like Astrotrain in this one. He's so careful and yet wants so deeply and you balance those two wonderfully well.

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lstarrunner April 7 2008, 04:50:06 UTC
No! No, you still get to read it, it just couldn't be entered in the challenge. Yes?

I like how you put that, "He's so careful and yet wants so deeply..." I am glad you can see that in their story. Thank you for saying I did him justice.

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mmouse15 April 8 2008, 01:25:32 UTC
Yes! I'm glad we get to read it, but I did think the challenge was perfect and I was excited because I thought FOR ONCE I'd be able to pick out a story and know who wrote it. But it was not to be, and I get to read it anyway. I'm so lucky...thank you!
Oh yes, more than justice. Astrotrain wasn't even on my TF radar until I read your stories, and now I'm a fan. Well, OK, I'm a fan of Astrotrain and Cobweb and Starrunner the way you write them...

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lstarrunner April 8 2008, 02:54:43 UTC
*scuffs foot on floor* Aww, thank you. I'm glad I got Astrotrain some love - he's so overlooked in the fandom, so little canon to go on, it seems.

And the challenges are supposed to be anonymous... ;-)

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wyntir_rose April 7 2008, 17:36:33 UTC
As always that was fantastic! I love the way you write Astrotrain, and Enny is just fantastic!

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lstarrunner April 8 2008, 02:56:44 UTC
Thank you! Especially for saying you like both of them.

Have a rose, my dear.

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okami_myrrhibis April 7 2008, 19:56:34 UTC
Beautiful...

and that Astrotrain realizes he "loves" her, but isn't quite sure just WTH that means... spot-on!

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lstarrunner April 8 2008, 02:59:04 UTC

*shy smile* Again, you seem to hit on a moment with which I was particularly struck: ... he tried out the word in his CPU, and the universe didn't cease, the matter of his being didn't convert immediately to energy, his orbital plane didn't even shift.... Glad you liked!

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lstarrunner April 9 2008, 01:26:28 UTC
Thank you for saying.

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