The Sins of 0-Mission

[lrig_rorrim]

There was a date written in the upper left corner of the whiteboard in Carla Pressman’s office, boxed off in green marker. That date was 5.11.2012 10:33 a.m. EDT. She didn’t need it written down, of course. It was the most significant moment in her life - and perhaps everyone else’s too. But she wrote it down just in case, on the white board, on

Comments

[beldarzfixon]

Bravo! I liked the two storylines playing cat-and-mouse with each other, the second never really catching up.

[lrig_rorrim]

*takes a bow* Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it! I had fun playing with the two stories and twisting them together.

[lrig_rorrim]

I think it's something we all wish, from time to time. I'm glad you enjoyed the concept. :)

[alien_infinity]

This was such a neat concept! ^_^

[lrig_rorrim]

Thank you! I had two different ideas for this prompt, both kind of out there. I may yet write something for the other idea, too. :)

[alycewilson]

Fun! Of course, I'm not sure whether she'd fix it or whether she'd set off a supernova in the timeline, but it's a satisfying end.

[lrig_rorrim]

It seemed an appropriate ending, yeah. And personally, I'm leaning towards kaboom. ;)

[notodette]

What a creative story, not just in content but in style.

[lrig_rorrim]

I'm really glad you enjoyed it! Thanks! :)