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[lrig_rorrim]

Mary paused in the bedroom door. Her mother was sitting on her bed, staring out the window and holding something in her lap. It was strange to see her so still, so quiet. She felt a tremor of unease in her stomach. “Mom? Are you ok

Comments

[magicmarmot]

Oh, man. Nice.

[lrig_rorrim]

Thank you! I was a little worried writing this and its companion ( Disappear) because they're set in a world I've been working on for mumblemuttertwelveyears a long while. I was afraid that knowing things too well might work against me for actually telling the stories. I'm really glad you enjoyed it. :)

[alien_infinity]

This was fantastic! ^_^

[lrig_rorrim]

Thank you!

[n3m3sis42]

Oh my. This was heartwrenching. Loved it.

[lrig_rorrim]

Thank you! I got some really high praise from my sweetie after he read this one - he said he teared up. It's kind of odd to be delighted to make people sad, you know? But also neat. :)

[jem0000000]

This is beautiful, and I like the changes you've made. :)

[lrig_rorrim]

Thank you so much! :)

[medleymisty]

Awesome, as always. :) I like how he fell into a black hole. ;)

[lrig_rorrim]

Thank you! There are lots and lots of nasty things that can happen to you in the worlds inside my head. :)