Closer

Jun 13, 2012 16:25

Come closer, and I’ll tell you a story. Would you like to hear the one about the moon’s mistress? Or how the stars lost their color? Something scary, you say. Well, I think I can manage that. Did I ever tell you how I got this scar, here on my ankle? It’s not a pleasant tale. Maybe I should choose another… No? Well, all right then ( Read more... )

elushae, fiction, ljidol

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myrna_bird June 21 2012, 15:48:36 UTC
Spooky Awesome. Loved it!

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alycewilson June 21 2012, 17:30:30 UTC
Spooky! I liked this.

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halfshellvenus June 21 2012, 19:49:54 UTC
Oh, this was wonderfully creepy. The idea of the forest eating creatures that pass through it-- Eee!

lore about wanderwoods
Excellent name for them, too!

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whipchick June 21 2012, 21:27:45 UTC
I really like the end, and the hint that they may be in danger, too!

The voice here was lovely - so lulling. The word "kids" stuck out for me, though - made me wonder because the beginning feels colloquial but older, and 'kids' seemed like a time jump.

Delightfully creepy!

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