I’ve tried every means I know how in order to discover ... the "how" seems odd to me in that sentence; I wouldn't say it.
sparing ... "sparring", yes?
Saul lead as best he could ... "lead"? Wrong tense? But even with "led", it seems a bit odd; I'd expect "explained" or something similar.
Because a moon when viewed from another system would always appear full. ... Hmm? That doesn't make astronomical sense to me. E.g. if the moon is between me and its star, the moon will not appear full. Is it intentional that he says a dubious statement? If intentional, it seems distracting in a not good way.
an Porgeusa ... intentionally jarring? (i.e. are we to suppose that the "P" is silent?)
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I’ve tried every means I know how in order to discover
... the "how" seems odd to me in that sentence; I wouldn't say it.
sparing
... "sparring", yes?
Saul lead as best he could
... "lead"? Wrong tense? But even with "led", it seems a bit odd; I'd expect "explained" or something similar.
Because a moon when viewed from another system would always appear full.
... Hmm? That doesn't make astronomical sense to me. E.g. if the moon is between me and its star, the moon will not appear full. Is it intentional that he says a dubious statement? If intentional, it seems distracting in a not good way.
an Porgeusa
... intentionally jarring? (i.e. are we to suppose that the "P" is silent?)
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