Comments | lozenger8: I’m not the man they think I am at home...

lozenger8

I’m not the man they think I am at home...

Mar 29, 2007 00:24

Title: It’s Gonna Be A Long, Long Time
Fandom: Life on Mars
Rating: G
Word Count: 400 words.
Notes: Gen. Obvious “Rocket Man” title. Spoilers for 2.06.

( It's Gonna Be A Long, Long Time )

rated g, writing, tiny, life on mars, gen

Comments 23

freefalling85 April 2 2007, 13:04:25 UTC

God this is *good*.

Really, really liked this. The last line's a killer.

*claps you*

lozenger8 April 5 2007, 15:40:59 UTC

Thank you so much :)

catwalksalone April 5 2007, 09:44:30 UTC

This is fantastic. Not just as a characterisation of Gene, - which, you win - but also as a study of the human condition.

Perfect.

lozenger8 April 5 2007, 15:41:59 UTC

Thanks! ♥

Loneliness and I are old chums ;)

flurblewig April 5 2007, 18:07:23 UTC

Wonderful! Achingly poignant.

lozenger8 April 5 2007, 23:18:57 UTC

Thank you!

made_in_ink April 5 2007, 20:52:24 UTC

I adore this on so many levels. Your characterisation is spot on and you ended on a really strong line. I love your writing style! *is jealous*

lozenger8 April 5 2007, 23:19:40 UTC

Thanks :D

tabula_x_rasa April 6 2007, 00:39:20 UTC

*flail*

That's really just amazing. Which isn't surprising, seeing as it's you, but yes, amazing.

lozenger8 April 6 2007, 00:45:32 UTC

Thank you. *blush*