Comments | lozenger8: Yes, I do write primarily for myself, can you tell?

lozenger8

Yes, I do write primarily for myself, can you tell?

Aug 23, 2006 13:24

Title: The Number You Have Dialled Has Crashed Into A Planet
Rating: G
Fandom: Life on Mars
Word Count: 500 words.
Notes: I had to write my LoM OTP. Sam/Mobile Phone. Set before the series begins. The title is a line from Futurama.

( The Number You Have Dialled )

humour, rated g, writing, short, life on mars, twisted, gen

Comments 26

wishfulaces August 23 2006, 04:09:40 UTC

Luckily, he’d never have to.

Oh, sweetheart. *pets Sam*

lozenger8 August 23 2006, 04:10:38 UTC

I know. The implications are just too much, aren't they?

meli_64 August 23 2006, 04:12:27 UTC

That's really good! I love the title!

lozenger8 August 23 2006, 04:13:29 UTC

Thanks Meli :D

Ahh yes. It was wonderfully appropriate - Life on Mars - Phones.

meli_64 August 23 2006, 05:21:35 UTC

It is appropriate! I can totally see Sam thinking about phones. :D

neuralclone August 23 2006, 05:00:15 UTC

Look at Neuralclone bursting a vein as she struggles not to laugh out loud at work. *EG*

(BTW - I spotted one teeny tiny error. It should be "bear" as in "He couldn't bear to chuck it out" rather than "bare".)

lozenger8 August 23 2006, 05:01:41 UTC

Thank you for that.

(I always, always do that. I have no idea why but I get so confused with bear and bare, it's ridiculous. English Major my arse.)

neuralclone August 23 2006, 05:35:30 UTC

Freudian slip? Maybe you really, really want Sam to "bare" something. *EG*

*Ouch!*

lozenger8 August 23 2006, 09:51:56 UTC

I wish it was only Sam I did it with, that would be a wonderful excuse :D

v23474 August 23 2006, 08:51:17 UTC

Loved it *g*

How reassuring to know that I share a mobile phone obsession with a character who is so endearingly dazed and confused :D

lozenger8 August 23 2006, 09:51:36 UTC

I don't actually own a mobile phone - was it true to life?!

Thank you :D

v23474 August 23 2006, 09:52:34 UTC

Speaking from experience...YES !

sophiedb August 23 2006, 10:07:55 UTC

Don't you just love crazy OTPs? Although this one is so appropriate for the poor babe, now relegated to a police whistle *cackle*

I have to admit though, I did wonder whether you'd bring the vibration function into it :)

lozenger8 August 23 2006, 10:42:14 UTC

You have no idea how tempted I was :D

Thank you.