Comments | loz22: New Fic

loz22

New Fic

Apr 07, 2008 23:12

Title: Fear - a feeling of danger, evil etc

Pairing: Pete/ Patrick

Summary: Patrick never believed in fear.

Rating: PG-13

( Fear - a feeling of danger, evil etc. )

Comments 8

kooku4u April 7 2008, 02:26:25 UTC

“You’re lame,” Patrick said.

“I’ll lame you up.”
hahahaha

this was wonderful

loz22 April 7 2008, 03:10:50 UTC

hehehe thanks!

kittygrenade April 9 2008, 03:13:09 UTC

Patrick was going to kill Ryan. First he was going to confiscate his hair straightener. Then, he was going to cut up his clothes and feed them to him, vest by vest. <----- *nearly chokes on orange soda* That was made of so much win!

I'd imagine Ryan being extremely traumatized to find his straightener missing.

loz22 April 9 2008, 08:52:16 UTC

I can just imagine his horrified reaction!!!!

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

anonymous April 10 2008, 01:33:39 UTC

cute. it's allowed not aloud, though.

loz22 April 10 2008, 01:55:09 UTC

Cute comment

awww xmexandxyoux June 24 2008, 00:18:42 UTC

so cute.

particular parts that i liked :

"But maybe he loves you more."

and

"And what about Brendon? That kid having too much sugar?"

and

"Patrick was trying really hard to sound concerned, not like Christmas had come early..."

and

"Patrick was going to kill Ryan. First he was going to confiscate his hair straightener. Then, he was going to cut up his clothes and feed them to him, vest by vest."

awesome.

Re: awww loz22 June 24 2008, 02:20:58 UTC

Thanks for such an awesome comment! I'm glad you enjoyed it