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graciouswings in lower_tadfield

Beware! Newbie bearing Fics!

Sep 20, 2005 13:37

Two, actually. Hi. I've finally plucked up the courage to stop lurking, work out LJ and join the party. I'm very new to this, so I hope it works all right. If it doesn't, advice on what I'm doing wrong would be greatly appreciated ( Read more... )

baby, crowley, aziraphale/crowley, gen, fic, aziraphale

Comments 8

she_flame September 20 2005, 13:47:34 UTC

Not bad stories at all, but I've hoped some division into paragraphs. It was pretty hard to read like that. :( But, I liked. Very nice.

Btw, good work with prude!Azi in 'Waching Over You'. :D

graciouswings October 3 2005, 19:51:26 UTC

Thanks for reviewing! Feedback is fcwriter-chocolate - apologies for taking such a long while, I have had a thesis attack me and take over my life.
Thanks also for the advice - at the moment I'm trying to work out how to format things nicely in Livejournal, but hopefully it'll get sorted out. I'll try braving the big bad edit button, and hope it doesn't just delete the lot on me :)
Thanks again!

digopheliadug September 20 2005, 13:57:35 UTC

I liked your stories a lot. I don't know why Crowley and Azi before the fall never really occurred to me - I guess I just always assumed that they didn't know each other. Great concept.

I am, however, wondering if anyone but me saw a myriad of opportunities to make Watching Over You subtley and not-so-subtley dirtier. ^_^

graciouswings October 3 2005, 19:54:55 UTC

I'm mildly worried. I'm trying to think about how you could make Watching over You dirtier, and I'm coming up blank. I think my innuendo-facility has gone phut. Thanks for commenting, though. Nothing like it for making a gal's day :)

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graciouswings October 3 2005, 20:00:58 UTC

Whoops. Still not very familiar with the Livejournally posting format. Will try to edit it as soon as I can (thesis - don't ask). Cheers.

musegaarid September 20 2005, 18:54:13 UTC

Kiddie angels and tickle fights? So adorable! Please keep writing!

graciouswings October 3 2005, 19:59:07 UTC

Thank you ! I thought they were cute too, so I had to write them. Actually, I have a second part in production at the moment, set post-canon, where they finally work out where their old best friends got to ... I have high hopes I may produce my first bit of slashiness. I'm so excited :D
Anyhow, thanks muchly for the feedback

musegaarid October 3 2005, 20:28:33 UTC

I'm looking forward to it! ;)