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lower_case_me

Fic: Four ways 3/4

Feb 09, 2007 19:07

Title: Four ways 3/4
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Tosh/Ianto/Gwen/Owen, not necessarily in that order.
Summary: One slip and whoops, there's alien sex pheromone all over the floor. And four dozing Torchwood agents.

( Part 3, Gwen Cooper )

Comments 14

absinthefairy88 February 9 2007, 19:47:59 UTC

Love it. Love it. Love it!

I am dying to read Ianto's part:)

And a little bit of Jack/Ianto always makes me happy:D

lower_case_me February 9 2007, 21:32:20 UTC

Ianto's part will be up soon. Snow has disrupted by Friday-night going out plans, so I'm having a night in with TW bunnies :).

Thanks for the lovely comment.

carly_took February 9 2007, 19:52:15 UTC

I love this chapter! It seems to flow perfectly with the Tosh-POV that came before it.

The idea of Gwen trying to make sense of her feelings was amazing. The fact she dreamed of trying to explain it to Rhys was good too, as she was trying to make sense of it all.

I'm also glad to see she found the sight of Jack/Ianto kissing to be arousing, because it shows she's become more dare i say "flexible" in terms of sexuality from her experience with Toshiko.

Hope you write the Ianto chapter soon!

lower_case_me February 9 2007, 21:34:42 UTC

Thanks. That was more or less what I was going for.

hinsoullai February 9 2007, 19:54:31 UTC

*chortles madly at Gwen trying to explain to Rhys about Torchwood*

Gwen thinking about Jack/Ianto? I find that.. guh. GUH. [Threesome, anyone?.. *shifty*]

Wooow.. haaaaaawt.. guh.. I mean.. GUH.. both Jack/Ianto and Tosh/Gwen... HAAAAAAWT..

Can't wait for the last part [IANTO YAY]!

lower_case_me February 9 2007, 21:36:07 UTC

In the next part I will even attempt to write het *shock, horror* :)

crystalshard February 9 2007, 20:02:26 UTC

A nice shift from the previous two perspectives, but still tying in well. I like the concept of Gwen dreaming about explaining to Rhys. Gwen's dream-logic is exactly the kind that always does seem sensible in dreams.

Very nicely done.

lower_case_me February 9 2007, 21:36:27 UTC

Thanks :)

tonko February 9 2007, 20:21:44 UTC

Whew. I haven't read much femslash lately but this little series is really making me want to go look for some. ::fans self:: This is so dreamy, and vivid in the way that dreams feel.

lower_case_me February 9 2007, 21:38:42 UTC

There needs to be more Tosh femslash in the world. Lots more. Thanks for the comment- very satisfying.