Are you going to continue this? Because it's a great premise and wonderful start and I would love to see Kurt deal with the PTSD after that.
I was locked in a room in highschool by accident, and even though it was just an hour, I still really hate, bordering on being phobic, about getting locked somewhere without escape.
If you do, and are worried, then you should get a really good beta, someone who will do more than just spelling and grammar and actually con-crit's it so you can edit and fix and make it all kinds of wonderful - which I know you totally can because this was perfect.
I really liked this. (: Continuations or not, I liked this story as a whole. The whole being-caught-in-a-dark-confined-space thing? You really captured the sheer, pants-pissing terror aspect of it!
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Are you going to continue this? Because it's a great premise and wonderful start and I would love to see Kurt deal with the PTSD after that.
I was locked in a room in highschool by accident, and even though it was just an hour, I still really hate, bordering on being phobic, about getting locked somewhere without escape.
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I'm terribly sorry that happened to you- I managed to lock myself in a closet when I was little.
Thanks so much for the review!
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Thanks for the review!
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The whole being-caught-in-a-dark-confined-space thing? You really captured the sheer, pants-pissing terror aspect of it!
Awesome job. (: ♥
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