Somebody That I Used To Know

May 21, 2012 21:52

Title: Somebody That I Used To Know

Pairing: Jalex

Author: lovethekirken or ali

P.O.V.: Alex

Rating: PG 13

Summary: No you didn't have to stoop so low, have your friends collect your records and then change your number.

Disclaimer: title and summary credits to Gotye!

A/N: at the bottom ; but anything in italics is a flashback!

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now and then i think of all the times you screwed me over )

somebody that i used to know

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amyalltimelow13 May 23 2012, 22:17:50 UTC
You need to at least do a follow up to this because it was so good! I want a happy ending :p
I like it so far, maybe you could go into detail about what his last encounter with Jack was exactly? Like a flashback? Then for the next part (you could make it a three part thing) you should explain why Jack turned up at his door and have him catch Alex out with the self harm?
You're really good at writing - most fanfics have SO MANY typos whereas this one had like two where you worded it slightly wrong (sorry for sounding beta-ish)
Sorry for rambling :p add me as a friend and I could help you out if you want? :)
-Amy

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lovethekirken August 11 2012, 20:21:09 UTC
hi oh my god this is so late but i just read it now, and apperantlyi already have you on my friends list :S but it wont let me send you a message! and i will start writing the second part now if you wanna be the beta for that! :-)

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amyalltimelow13 August 11 2012, 22:54:01 UTC
Ah - this is so creepy but I was reading this yesterday again :O
I haven't been on livejournal in AGES :(
I'll send you a message now and see if you can reply to that :p
Start writing! :D I'd definitely be beta! :'D
- Amy

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lovethekirken October 29 2012, 03:29:46 UTC
HI! it still doesn't let me reply to you, its like 'your message cannot be sent because of your privacy settings or whatever? :s & im so sorry i didn't reply sooner! i would have, but i dont come on very often considering i have basically nothing to write about, but now that you're here to help out, which i appreciate A LOT, i'll be coming on way more often!!

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