Title: Somebody That I Used To Know
Pairing: Jalex
Author: lovethekirken or ali
P.O.V.: Alex
Rating: PG 13
Summary: No you didn't have to stoop so low, have your friends collect your records and then change your number.
Disclaimer: title and summary credits to Gotye!
A/N: at the bottom ; but anything in italics is a flashback!
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now and then i think of all the times you screwed me over )
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I like it so far, maybe you could go into detail about what his last encounter with Jack was exactly? Like a flashback? Then for the next part (you could make it a three part thing) you should explain why Jack turned up at his door and have him catch Alex out with the self harm?
You're really good at writing - most fanfics have SO MANY typos whereas this one had like two where you worded it slightly wrong (sorry for sounding beta-ish)
Sorry for rambling :p add me as a friend and I could help you out if you want? :)
-Amy
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I haven't been on livejournal in AGES :(
I'll send you a message now and see if you can reply to that :p
Start writing! :D I'd definitely be beta! :'D
- Amy
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