Phantom Load - Part 1

[lovesrain44]

Tuesday, November 21st, 2006

Sam snapped the phone shut, and shifted in his seat. “Okay,” he said, “I got us a gig.” The darkening flat landscape sped past outside the passenger window.

“What kind?” Dean asked this without taking his eyes off the road or his hands off the wheel.

“Haunted school,” said Sam. He pulled out a map and unfolded it,

Comments

[soymaid]

I think referring to what the wheechesters have as "tummies" might be the best literary decison of this millenium.

[lovesrain44]

Hey, thanks! I think that tummies are awfully cute, stomachs are what doctors poke at, and bellies are for lovers. Thus, the choice for the Wee boys. : D

[jaylan121]

Wow, disturbing but wonderful
Such a great big brother Dean is
Thank you
off to read the rest

[lovesrain44]

Thank you so much for reading - I hope you enjoyed it!