Phantom Load - Part 2

[lovesrain44]

Thursday, January 9th, 1992

The next day Dean found out that homework was definitely a big fat deal at Nevin Platt. The teachers in all his morning classes scowled at him for not having anything to hand in; even in gym, he got yelled at for not having the right footwear or uniform. When he told them he was still new, they tapped their respective

Comments

[serena64]

I love your style of writing. It seems very sparse and simple, and yet at the same time everything comes out incredibly vivid.
It's really easy to become totally immersed in your stories.

[lovesrain44]

You are so kind to say so. I hope the rest of your reading of this story is as good for you - I'm afraid it gets darker from here!

[jaylan121]

Your fic is an enigma & I feel creepy plastered all over my brain.
I want to know what happened exactly & I'm gnawing at the chapters. Wonderful