The Things We Carry With Us - Part 4 - Shamrock

Aug 15, 2010 16:50

Part 4 - Shamrock

In the morning, through breakfast and checking out of the motel, the rituals of their lives demanded that Sam converse with his older brother to discuss where they are going next. Even though Dean’s expression, however mild the conversation over the map and the local newspaper, tells Sam everything that he needs to know. That Sam ( Read more... )

slash, sam/dean, the things we carry with us, fic, big bang 2010

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keerawa August 20 2010, 19:51:32 UTC
The room is empty as Dean tends to leave a big space behind him when he goes.
Oh, nicely put.

I love the quiet rituals that order the boys' life on the road. Dean ordering by the numbers, the one to order gets the first bite, whoever looks cleanest goes into the motel office, the laundry bag by the door.

Caught a couple little typos: Dean is head on a plate should be his, and But there’s not way he an say this to Dean should be no way he can.

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lovesrain44 August 21 2010, 01:50:09 UTC
Thank you again, both for the lovely onging feedback and the fixes! I fixed 'em!

And yeah, it's the rituals that keep you sane on the road, because they're the only thing that doesn't change.

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