Inferno (Emily/JJ) part 5

Aug 26, 2009 23:03

Title: Inferno (5/?)
Fandom: Criminal Minds
Pairing: Emily/JJ
Rating: R
Disclaimer: I do not own Criminal Minds. This is just for entertainment purposes.
Summary: A killer is enacting Dante's Divine Comedy, can the team catch him before he reaches the ninth and final circle and can Emily and JJ finally cross the line into something more than friendship ( Read more... )

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nnnjtu August 27 2009, 03:35:40 UTC
Awww, that was lovely. I only have one little blip...

“Are prayers are with Cassidy.” JJ said kindly - I think you mean 'Our' lol.

This story is fantastic woman! Keep it up XD

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lovepb August 27 2009, 08:02:21 UTC
Lol, I knew I would make mistakes trying to get it up so quickly! Oh well, thanks for pointing it out.

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mozzdi August 27 2009, 04:30:10 UTC
Quick update, thanks for that and what a sweet way for the others to find out...I didn't think they'd be revealing it so soon but the Reid bit was so typical of nerd boy. Thanks again.

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lovepb August 27 2009, 08:05:00 UTC
I though ut would be a different way of looking at things for them to trust Morgan and Reid as well as the obvious Garcia. This way they will be able to navigate things easier and focus more and the relationship and less on hiding it. although I do intend to keep it from Hotch for a while yet.

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malexfaith August 27 2009, 04:43:48 UTC
Oh yeah... go team. You solved the case, and JJ and Emily came out...lol. This is exciting. It reads like Im watching it or am there with there. Awesome as always. Thanks heaps for sharing

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lovepb August 27 2009, 08:09:39 UTC
Thanks! I'm so glad that you think it is structured like an episode. I solved the case a lot quicker than in the episodes because it's not the main focus.

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frenhu August 27 2009, 09:17:48 UTC
An even better chapter than the previous one!

You are good!

I hope you continue soon! :)

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lovepb August 27 2009, 09:25:22 UTC
Lol, thanks!

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heidimaggs22 August 27 2009, 10:05:54 UTC
I'm loving how quickly these chapters are coming out! Can't wait to read the rest :)

Loving the team interaction, update soon!! Please?? :)

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lovepb August 27 2009, 10:53:54 UTC
I'm glad you like it! It may be a few days before the next chapter now, sorry!

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