At My Most Beautiful (27/27)

Jan 11, 2013 17:37


Title: At My Most Beautiful (27/27)
Fandom: Merlin
Characters/Pairings: Morgana/Morgause
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 9,500 for this chapter, 127,618 overall.
Chapter Summary: Morgana is perfectly, blissfully happy. She has everything she could not have even dreamed of having two years before. But with the tournament starting up again, her peace is ( Read more... )

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anonymous January 12 2013, 00:20:42 UTC
Okay. So this has become my favorite fanfiction ever. LITERALLY it has. And I'm about to gush big time about it :P ( ... )

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lovepb January 12 2013, 15:35:26 UTC
Oh, thank you! *blushes*

I'm glad you liked the dream turning out to be more than just a dream. If you remember in previous chapters whilst Morgause was at war, they had some shared dreams (though they didn't know that).

Yes, a lot of people are finding out about their relationship, and this fact will play heaving in the story to come. Do not take for granted that everyone means them well. And as for Uther, he did save Morgause's life but she was acting as Camelot's champion at the time. He saw foul play and did not want to lose the day's events. Saving Morgause was in his best interests, especially as Leon still isn't fit to fight.

I'm so happy that you like the depth that I've tried to give to the characters. I think that is one of the things the show did quite poorly, especially for the female characters. You will definitely see more of Leon's sister in the next part. She will have a big role to play.

And again thank you! You definitely didn't write too much. There can never be too much of such a lovely review. :)

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rtms January 12 2013, 01:53:30 UTC
Awwww this was a great series. A really defined and character driven story that flowed from chapter to chapter. You really know how to keep a reader interested. Morgana is my favorite of the show and I'm perturbed at how they ruined her character in the end. Yet another AU that's better than the show,lol. I look forward to reading more of your writings, but do take a rest and let your mind go free for awhile.

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lovepb January 12 2013, 15:36:23 UTC
Thank you! I was worried that a lot of people seem to have stopped reading, so I'm glad that I could keep you interested. :)

And thank you again!

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marybritney January 15 2013, 19:52:55 UTC
Wow! Simply wow.
I've read every single episode of this fic since you started posting it and I loved them all! So now finally the time has come to leave a comment here ;)

You really managed to give all characters enough depth to make them interesting, the story was so exciting, the lovescenes... well, hot.
Sometimes it was really hard to wait for the next chapter, but it was always definitly worth it.
Thank you for finishing the story. (there isn't a thing as dissatisfying as reading a fic that stops somewhere in the middle)
Thank you!

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lovepb January 15 2013, 20:38:11 UTC
Thank you! I'm so happy to hear from a reader who has been with this story from the beginning. Thanks for sticking with it, even when the waits were long.

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perhapssamson February 1 2013, 07:05:37 UTC
I started reading this fic from the very beginning and was immediately taken in by it. M/M, knights and queens? Spectacular! The way you wrote the dream was so realistic, it took me a while to realise that it was actually a dream instead of real life. The connection between Morgana and Morgause was simply beautiful!

While Uther had saved Morgause's life, I can't help but continue to dislike him (which, I believe was your intention in making him the villain of this fairytale). Also, when Gaius mentioned the knife got caught on Morgause's chain, I wondered briefly if Uther had caught a glimpse of the pendant and suspected what that might mean.

Mithian was brilliant as always, how like her to offer a treaty to Morgana instead of Uther!

And the twins, and Ellie and Tristan! I have high hopes for the next installment! Thank you for this fic!

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