At My Most Beautiful (10/?) - (Morgana/Morgause)

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Title: At My Most Beautiful (10/?)

Fandom: Merlin

Characters/Pairings: Morgana/Morgause

Rating: R

Word Count: ~3,300 for this part

Series Summary: In a world where things were ever so slightly different, Camelot had a young and beautiful Queen. A beautiful Queen, who was married to a cold and aging King. AU

Chapter Summary: The happy bubble Morgana

Comments

[anonymous]

Oh, ouch! And this chapter started off so beautifully too. I love how you wrote it though. It would be so easy to see Morgause as being selfish here when Morgana really had no say in getting pregnant, but the way you described how Morgause felt and why was just soul wrenching.

Loved this chapter, painful as it turned out to be. At least they've got plenty of time to work things out before having to head back!

[lovepb]

Thanks! I wanted to show that Morgause isn't perfect, far from it. She's been keeping herself in check so far for Morgana's sake.

[sweetveritas]

Oh my darlings. *HEARTBREAK* I just want to smush them together by locking them in a room.

I wonder how this is going to work out when they get back. Oooo the journey home is going to be QUIET!

[lovepb]

But the heartbreak was necessary to move on their relationship. It will either be the making or the breaking of them.

[rtms]

Oh Morgause come on be a little bit understanding. Morgana still loves you. I hope Morgause comes to her senses and comes back around. Morgana is going to need her now more than ever.

[lovepb]

Morgana will definitely need her more than ever and you'll just have to hope that Morgause sees that.

[anonymous]

Oh dear, this was always bound to happen I suppose. I think perhaps Morgause was a little naive to think that in some way this wasn't inevitable even if Morgana hadn't have gotten pregnant now, Uther would have still kept trying to make her so, so in a way this is probably a bit better.

I think its a shame that Morgause was so harsh to her but she was hurting too, it brings them back to reality in a very abrupt way.

I hope they are able to talk to each other properly before they leave back for Camelot or else things are only going to fester and get worse.

On a more positive note more sexy hot goodness between them at the beginning and its still flippin bloody brilliant.

[lovepb]

It was a shame that Morgause was so harsh with her but, as I said in a comment above, she has been trying very hard to keep herself in check for Morgana's sake, so she was bound to break eventually. Time will tell if Morgana can forgive her for it.

And I'm glad you enjoyed the beginning, that was far more fun to write!

[awen19]

Ooo, I'm not a fan of this side of Morgause! Elouise needs to have a talking with her, straighten her out!

[lovepb]

She definitely needs to sort herself out!