so, suggestions. 1. instead of "sequential art gallery offers saturday workshops to engage children in our community through creating sequential art" & "Introduction to sequential art: what is sequential art" Maybe combine them to say something like: "Sequential Art Gallery proudly presents 'Introduction to Sequential Art', a Saturday workshop for kids." A bit more condensed I think?
2. Having the duration is redundant when you've got the time (2-3:30) listed.
I think this looks really good but make I would clean it up a tiny bit. Make sure it clear that there are 2 sessions available each Saturday (if there are..)
Also I would bold the headings like price, when, duration, etc. and put each separate "thought" or statement on a new line and maybe put a space between the headings to make it a little easier to read.
Price: $5 per session Preregistration encouraged but drop-in's welcome Discounted four session package available for $18
When: Every Saturday 2 sessions are offered at 2pm and 3:30pm
Duration: 60 - 90 minutes
Teachers: etc.
Otherwise it looks good. The graphic is simple and neat and catches my eye.
I will think about making the fact that there are two workshops a day clearer. The thing about spacing out the headings more is relevant, but I am not sure there's enough room. I don't know why I love to bold the details over the headings, but I really do. Maybe it's too weird?
nah it's not weird, just quirky and I'm sure that is the vibe you are going for. I'm just more traditional I suppose and when I read flyers and know what catches my eye. :)
Sounds like an awesome project, Blue. That's a really huge age range, though. If I were a teenager, I might want to go, but I'd feel weird about going to a workshop with five-year-olds or even ten-year-olds. So, if you can, you might want to consider splitting it up into a few different age ranges, and have a separate poster that says "How would your teenager tell a story?" and "teens" instead of "kids".
It is a huge age range, but the idea behind having two workshops each Saturday is to be able to separate the younger and older kids (this may not be clear from the flier). So, when parents call to preregister, I talk to them about the age of their kids, the kids' hobbies and interests, etc. I have been having 10 & under in the first session and 11 & older in the later session.. The oldest kids that's registered so far is 11.
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1. instead of "sequential art gallery offers saturday workshops to engage children in our community through creating sequential art" & "Introduction to sequential art: what is sequential art" Maybe combine them to say something like:
"Sequential Art Gallery proudly presents 'Introduction to Sequential Art', a Saturday workshop for kids."
A bit more condensed I think?
2. Having the duration is redundant when you've got the time (2-3:30) listed.
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Yeah, that! And it might look good to put "Introduction to Sequential Art" in bold, instead of putting quotes around it.
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Also I would bold the headings like price, when, duration, etc. and put each separate "thought" or statement on a new line and maybe put a space between the headings to make it a little easier to read.
Price: $5 per session
Preregistration encouraged but drop-in's welcome
Discounted four session package available for $18
When: Every Saturday 2 sessions are offered at 2pm and 3:30pm
Duration: 60 - 90 minutes
Teachers: etc.
Otherwise it looks good. The graphic is simple and neat and catches my eye.
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I will think about making the fact that there are two workshops a day clearer. The thing about spacing out the headings more is relevant, but I am not sure there's enough room. I don't know why I love to bold the details over the headings, but I really do. Maybe it's too weird?
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