FIC: Tyger, Tyger, Burning Bright

[lovelylytton]

Title: Tyger, Tyger, Burning Bright
Characters: Kevin, Mina, Noel (AU)
A/N: I got a lovely postcard the other day, and then the squeeing knew no bounds! You wonderful people, you! Here, have some poetry smut. Also, borrowing characters from all over the place. And borrowing titles from Blake. And taking advantage of Elvis and his masculinity.

Comments

ONLY YOU!

[elvisvf101]

ONLY YOU CAN TAKE A PERFECTLY GOOD THREESOME FIC AND THEN TURN IT INTO ANGSTY MYSTERY AT THE END!!! AND NOT THE 'WE'LL GET A RESOLUTION IN 4 OR 5 CHAPTERS, BUT THE SORT OF 'HAHAHAHAHA, YOU THOUGHT THERE WOULD BE SEX FOREVER BUT NO, NO THERE ISN'T!' SORT OF MYSTERY!

Well wow, didn't see that coming. Brilliant work!

Re: ONLY YOU!

[lovelylytton]

*laugs*
Again, much obliged for your generous help! Without it, Kevin and his hard-on would have never managed to enter Mina's hut.

Woa.

That sounded dirty.

:D
Oh, my childish glee at puns will never end.

[apsaraqueen]

“I don’t know whether you’ve noticed, but I don’t really care,”

SOLD!!!

omfg, i am dying from the hotness of this. DYING. it's brilliant!!! i need - no, not kidding, NEED - to know where mina, international manhandler of mystery, is going next.

[lovelylytton]

:D

Mina is probably standing in the middle of the jungle right now, thinking that leaving two hot men behind might not have been her smartest move. Tyger Tyger Mina is a bit like Airmail Ando as far as travelling is concerned; she'll go wherever the wind blows her. As of now, her main thing is that her next destination doesn't have a rain season.

(I'm glad you find this hot, smut is fun, but also stresses me out because I can't do it with this apparent ease that the likes of you and V have. You people make it seem so effortless!)

[apsaraqueen]

the whole time i was reading this i was like "...wait, is she...? is she going to...? so are they really gonna...? YES. YES THEY JUST DID." and then i was like ":DDDDDDDD"

moral is, DON'T STRESS. WRITE MORE TYGER TYGER MINA.

[lovelylytton]

Perhaps I can churn out a bit more smut in May, now that Angsty April is over and has left the pain and suffering behind to make way for fun things. What did we all decide to call May now? Merry May? Mercurial May?

[senshifan]

Well this made my weekend a little bit better... and then the END! Why did she leave? I feel like a little kid asking why their pet dog isn't in the house anymore. I was all excited and YAY! Mina Kevin! And Noel, too! And smutiness! YAYYYY!

Then she's gone.

[lovelylytton]

Mina is a bit of a rolling stone: she appears and disappears in and from people's lives without much of an explanation, and perhaps, Kevin might actually see her again one day. She didn't leave because she doesn't like him, she left because she is not ready to settle down and felt that with him, she could possibly stand still for a while.

And while Mina enjoyed the night with both men, it is Kevin whom she could fall for, so in the long run, Noel and his wink couldn't hold water to Kevin and his glasses. Of course, that's also my own preference interfering a little. Call me biased. ;)

Thank you so much for your comment, I'm glad it made your weekend better!

[venusorbit1]

Um, um.

I need to read this four or five more times before I can properly comment.

First I need to shove ice cubes down my pants.

HOSHIT.

[lovelylytton]

V, V, V, I wrote a bit of smut! Are you proud of me? I AM BASICALLY YOUR CREATURE, MISS FRANKENSTEIN!

THIS

[venusorbit1]

THIS IS THE BEST FIC OF ALL TIME. OF ALL TIME.

THERE WAS...SHE...HE...PLEASE GOD HAVE ANOTHER MONSOON FIC! FUCK, KEVIN, RUN THE FUCK AFTER HER AND HAVE SEX IN A MONSOON ON THE HOOD OF THE STALLED JEEP (OH SHIT THAT'S HOT. WRITE IT.)

MOREOVER, PLEASE GOD NOEL HAS TO FUCK HIS WAY THROUGH THE SENSHI AND THEN END UP WITH BIG BOOBIED MAKOTO AKA HIS SOUL MATE AND THEY END UP DRINKING AND FUCKING FOREVER!!!

OMG WHERE DO I START???

I LOVE NOEL. HE IS THE PERFECT ASSHOLE. HE GOT THEM STUCK AND KEVIN WANTS TO KILL HIM AND LEAVE HIS BODY IN THE MONSOON.

BTW: PERFECT SETUP. I CAN SEE, FEEL, AND SMELL THESE TWO GUYS AND THE TINY DIRTY VILLAGE GETTING DELUGED WITH RAIN. I CAN PICTURE IT IN MY MIND. YOU ARE SO TALENTED. FUCK.

THERE WAS MONSTERSOCKS. YES. YES TIMES A MILLION.

NOEL JUST STRIPS DOWN LIKE 'LOL CHECK OUT MY JUNK COME TO ME FEMALE'. HE'S SUCH A GLORIOUS ASSHOLE. I LOVE HIM.

MONSTERSOCKS. LOVE.

KEVIN GETTING ALL HORNY IN BED. AWESOME.

MINA GETTING ALL ON HIM. AWESOME.

MONSTERFUCKING THREESOME. AWESOME.PLEASE PLEASE

Re: THIS

[lovelylytton]

FUCK, KEVIN, RUN THE FUCK AFTER HER AND HAVE SEX IN A MONSOON ON THE HOOD OF THE STALLED JEEP (OH SHIT THAT'S HOT. WRITE IT.)
That is hot indeed, but he wouldn't be able to find her. Mina has already disappeared to God knows where.

MOREOVER, PLEASE GOD NOEL HAS TO FUCK HIS WAY THROUGH THE SENSHI AND THEN END UP WITH BIG BOOBIED MAKOTO AKA HIS SOUL MATE AND THEY END UP DRINKING AND FUCKING FOREVER!!!
*coughs* Medical AU. *coughs*

NOEL JUST STRIPS DOWN LIKE 'LOL CHECK OUT MY JUNK COME TO ME FEMALE'. HE'S SUCH A GLORIOUS ASSHOLE. I LOVE HIM.
Ah, V, I love you for this comment, it is hilarious, and really makes my day. Which is going to be looooooong, so this is very welcome.
Noel has been taught by experience that women are not able to resist his naked form. Also: he knows no shame.

[sea_thoughts]

I find this interesting, partly because I can never see Kunzite sharing her with ANYONE, but you laid the groundwork well so I can let that go. And I'm weird because I didn't find the ending angsty, my reaction was actually "LOL Mina, you really think you can just disappear like that and you won't bump into him again? You really are very silly sometimes."

[lovelylytton]

Well, good, because I honestly wasn't going for anything angsty here, I thought I'd written happy smutty fic. *laughs* And I agree, in my mind, they will meet again at some point and perhaps she is than at a point in her life where she can stand still with him.

Kunzite!Kunzite is not one for sharing, but this Kevin!Kunzite was a bit more accommodating, mainly because he was very desperate and very taken with her. I couldn't write the actual sharing though because a) a bit too explicit for my smutability, and b) super tricky to write because the balance between the men's attention on Mina has to very well maintained or Kunzite would storm out in a funk.

[sea_thoughts]

Yeah, she's definitely not at the right point in her life right now (and heck, maybe meeting him was something extra to make her run).

this Kevin!Kunzite was a bit more accommodating, mainly because he was very desperate and very taken with her

Okay, I get it. :) Also, I thought Noel was hilarious.

[lovelylytton]

I'm glad you found Noel funny, he had a bit of a difficult position as the sexy stumbling block in a fic about soulmates meeting in the jungle.

*laughs*