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lovelydagger23

Define Freedom Chapter five

Dec 01, 2010 02:55

Title: Define Freedom

Author: ( Read more... )

humor, hyde, violence, fluff, angst, gackt

Comments 11

eadwine63 December 1 2010, 11:46:46 UTC

yaaay! another chapter!!
I'm gonna be so sad when this is over... :(
I loved how you described the accident. Very vivid, but not too graphic.
and awww they're so cute together!!

lovelydagger23 December 2 2010, 13:46:54 UTC

I'm glad you like it...yes it'll be over in two more chapters...but smile, because I'm going to write a side story next. :D

eadwine63 December 2 2010, 15:28:15 UTC

*runs over and jumps you in utter joy*

lovelydagger23 December 2 2010, 15:30:28 UTC

b_sim December 1 2010, 14:19:24 UTC

Bwahaha I knew Hyde was the older boy! And ew, terrible uncle; glad he's dead.

lovelydagger23 December 2 2010, 13:48:28 UTC

Yep you were right.

And yes, the evil uncle had to go....too bad the adults who could have helped Hyde were too stupid to notice what was going on. >.>

esstellionn December 1 2010, 19:21:42 UTC

Aww...:(

lovelydagger23 December 2 2010, 13:49:37 UTC

*Gives you a hanky*

mikantoringo December 2 2010, 04:44:35 UTC

Poor Gacchan..
Poor Hyde..
I hope it's a happy ending fic..

lovelydagger23 December 2 2010, 13:51:33 UTC

It does hold a happy ending...you'll just have to keep reading. ^.^

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lovelydagger23 December 3 2010, 23:27:12 UTC

Yeah he was, it's a surprise Hyde didn't really tell him so.

Yes, the uncle was pure ebil, and got what he deserved.